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taking form
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it began cloudy
like an overcast day
blown in from the ocean
slowly taking form
 


an image foretelling
like a hand woven quilt
stitched with threads of care
and thoughts from wishing well
 


it knew of life
and its strange uniqueness
languid water and burning fire
dust of earth and waft of air
 


it was star dust a celestial creation
sleep walking through dreamscape
in paradise unlimited
and space allowed unfolding
 


divine qualities like a father’s console
inspiring a mothers nurture
it seemed each was creating the other
empowering itself as it spiraled
 


breathtaking close
it reflects in the eyes
an intimate journey
inside its mind
 


heartbeat soft
and sure terrain
electric touch
would glow the plain
 


the raindrops begin
the water seeps
let it rise and sink into
aptly becoming you


 


 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "taking form"
Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on February 24, 2004
WOW what a wonderful trip
the imagery is great!!!
filledwith greatlines
enjoyed deeply

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 24, 2004
excellent images in this poem ...

it was star dust a celestial creation
sleep walking through dreamscape
in paradise unlimited
and space allowed unfolding
divine qualities like a father’s console
inspiring a mothers nurture
it seemed each was creating the other
empowering itself as it spiraled <-- great!


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