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She Leaned Through the Trees
by Charlie → (All Poetry by Charlie)
Tuesday, July 10, 2018    Rated "G" by the Author.
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She leaned through the trees, and suddenly the whole of life made sense to me...

 

She leaned through the trees 
Like she leaned through life,
Arms curled around their slender trunks
Head forward,
Chin tilted,
With one long leg stretched out behind. 

She leapt through the timbers
Like she leapt through life,
Delicately dancing on dangerous curves,
Lichened bark husks,
Toadstools, bear scat, boulders
Nimbly skipping decayed, half-hidden deadfall.

I see her now 
Half cradling, half swooning
Leaping from narrow limb 
To ground
And back again
Laughing among leaves,
Tossing love high in the air,
And jumping, arms outstretched 
To meet it falling back at her.

And I sit waiting
Anxious, trying to catch, and trying to capture.
I wait on this willow 
Like I've waited on life,
Half-gasps, half-sighs
Eyes closed and ears wide open…
I can almost hear the dead twigs speaking.

They click through the branches
Like they click through life,
Sounds curved around long, hollowed wrists,
Lisps forward,
Wind tilted,
With one lone rasp stretched out behind...

They wind around limbs
Like they wind through…

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Reviewed by David Clure
Reviewed on October 20, 2018
Beautiful, poignant, visually intense

- ZB.McClure

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on September 3, 2018
I was wondering, reading about all the movement in this poem, why one character is always moving and the other seems to be motionless, just watching. Can we understand life by observing others live? My answer would be yes, we can, although there would be something missing. Is there a strong connection between the two characters? Why is the other constantly moving and dancing? These metaphors are still mysterious to me. Another poem, please! 😄

Reviewed on July 22, 2018
Waiting is often the hardest, or the easiest part of life. Well captured in your poem.

Reviewed by Leo Durrant
Reviewed on July 17, 2018
You know, it's never too late to toss love high in the air and jump (arms outstretched) to meet it falling back at you. You don't have to sit anxiously waiting. Not with a voice like yours.
I love the line "lichened bark husks." If you say it over and over, the words seem to grow moss. Dark, dank, secretive, a little bit hairy. Contrasts perfectly with "delicately dancing on dangerous curves." That tap-danced staccato, all sun-shiny and carefree. A great foreshadowing of the following two contrasting stanzas.
I could learn a lot from you.
Oh, wait. I already have.
Love you.

Reviewed by Glenda Bixler
Reviewed on July 14, 2018
I wonder, dear Charlie, if both sections of this quite interesting poem are part of you??? We are go through periods of feeling both, usually with the latter part hidden, like you say on your opening page... I too have a hidden part...but as I get older, more and more seems to pour out...but it's been years that I did more than "dream" through the former part of your words...all of which are lovely...

Reviewed by Ariella Turcotte
Reviewed on July 12, 2018
I love the imagery!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 11, 2018
You keep a certain surreal character throughout this very natural peace and leave me wondering just what "she" is and why she is so ethereal. A dream, perchance?

Ron

Reviewed by Jean Pike
Reviewed on July 10, 2018
Beautiful, Charlie!


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