She leaned through the trees
Like she leaned through life,
Arms curled around their slender trunks
Head forward,
Chin tilted,
With one long leg stretched out behind.
She leapt through the timbers
Like she leapt through life,
Delicately dancing on dangerous curves,
Lichened bark husks,
Toadstools, bear scat, boulders
Nimbly skipping decayed, half-hidden deadfall.
I see her now
Half cradling, half swooning
Leaping from narrow limb
To ground
And back again
Laughing among leaves,
Tossing love high in the air,
And jumping, arms outstretched
To meet it falling back at her.
And I sit waiting
Anxious, trying to catch, and trying to capture.
I wait on this willow
Like I've waited on life,
Half-gasps, half-sighs
Eyes closed and ears wide open…
I can almost hear the dead twigs speaking.
They click through the branches
Like they click through life,
Sounds curved around long, hollowed wrists,
Lisps forward,
Wind tilted,
With one lone rasp stretched out behind...
They wind around limbs
Like they wind through…
- ZB.McClure
I love the line "lichened bark husks." If you say it over and over, the words seem to grow moss. Dark, dank, secretive, a little bit hairy. Contrasts perfectly with "delicately dancing on dangerous curves." That tap-danced staccato, all sun-shiny and carefree. A great foreshadowing of the following two contrasting stanzas.
I could learn a lot from you.
Oh, wait. I already have.
Love you.
Ron