Bus Trip (poem) by David J Knight on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Excellent write, love your meter and rhyme!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

David,
Imagery created the emotions and
motion well in this one.
PJ

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Great one David, a fortuitous holdup, once feeling annoyed at running out of petrol, I found I had escaped a pile up just minutes later, had I not been forcibly stopped I might have been a part of it.

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

I really like this format it is strong.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Well done.....

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Strong message in this one.....thanks for sharing!!

Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

A minor inconvience often saves a life. Mankind is in too much of a rush. Great write.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Great write with a strong message.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

David, reminds me of the time we were planning a family vacation and had made airline reservations, and at the last minute decided to drive. The plane crashed. I'll never forget the silence of the whines of the children when that was announced over the radio in the car. Not one more word was said for about the next fifty miles. But there were many many tears being shed. ~SH~

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Another strong message. You're ever so good at these.Well written as always.
~Chrissie
Was that you I heard singing in the rain yesterday ?

Reviewed by The Gentle Man

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Dave this is a stunning poem....very well written!

Reviewed by Linda Hill

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

~Excellent, my friend.
You have a talent
beyond words. Your
creativity speaks
for itself..

Cugs,
~Linda

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

GREAT WRITE DAVE

YES, SAFTY STOP ME ANYTIME,
BEFORE SOME CORPORATE BOSS
COMMITS A CRIME
JUST TO SAVE HIMSELF
A FEW MISERABLE DIMES,
BY DISREGADING SAFTY CHECKS
DUE AT TIMES

WILLIAM

Reviewed by T. Emilie Dybevik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

I swear, I missed my bus...lol! I liked the "go solve some real crime" bit. That has to be international...lol! Reminds me of a flight that was delayed in London FOREVER because they had to replace a part. EVERYONE was complaining....but, had we been on that plane, no one would have complained.

Thanks,
Emilie

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2003

Felt like I had a ticket.