Good expression and starting with the children is a must..
Reviewed by angel michael (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2002
Bravo....keep writing my friend.
~~michael~~
Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2002
David
Excellent starting point, justs needs to be
extended, first class.
morchuis
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2002
Very well-expressed. I so agree with you David! You're doing great as a started. You're writing depicts the maturity. Writing is in-born, but we all discover it at different points in life dear friend.
"We walked in on a surreal scene. There are few words, if any, to accurately describe the abject horror..."
What Jeannie and Kevin McDonough saw was a wanted, multi-state serial killer about to take his next victim - their own daughter. W
~~michael~~
Excellent starting point, justs needs to be
extended, first class.
morchuis