Spiritual Chains (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Spiritual Chains
by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse → (All Poetry by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse)
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nemesis rises from the occipital haunting of dark poetic expressions.....
Photograpahy Artist: http:/directionsforpest/.deviantart.com/ Spiritual Chains Doomed into the skull of phantoms, memories merge the poet’s soul… Heathens wrought by iniquities, are tragically hidden like a vile troll… For centuries you were silenced, banished into the calvarias portals… Surrendering your foyers of ambiguity, into the dungeons of sodden temporals… Breath now upon my freedom’s semblance, for your lingering voice can now arise… Within your occipitals poetic intentions, spiritual chains are no longer scourged demise… (Written: March 31^st, 2008 3:43 p/m) Copyright © 2008 Vickie L. McColley In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love poétess d ‘ amour ~ poétessse romantique

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Your pen rests not on the laurels of your last success. For now you have penned even greater poetry anew. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 8, 2008

No one is more a slave than those that wear their spiritual chains without rebellion.

Georg

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 7, 2008

I wonder who are your "teachers" or "guides" who help you write. I've always said that I don't write what I share; it is given to me. I am still "overwhelmed," by the way. Love and hugs,

Regis xo

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Vickie, your eloquent words have much strength and wisdom, and beautifully written!

Love,
et

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Powerfully penned, Vickie, gives one pause - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)

Your writing tends to stop me in my tracks, make me think, and make me analyze my reactions to your words. "...for your lingering voice can now rise..." is my favorite line of this one - it is the light of hope that eventually all is possible.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Like the way this write expresses so much in a political statement that can be applied by the reader to so much that is going on in today's society. I see the women of certain countries for so long and even in today's world being kept as virtual slaves to men. I hear through this there voices speaking from the heart and soul. Truly a great write when it allows people to stop and reflect on the meanings it could possess. Well done Vick.
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Fee