UNVEILED (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

UNVEILED
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Undeniable Acceptance Of The Intuitiveness We All Possess In The Paths We Choose To Pave...
Photography Artist: http://namroev.deviantart.com/ Unveiled Unveiled by the darkness silently hidden; I heard the silk voice of love’s fainted cry. No longer held in deceptions of wrath; spoken by the satin possessions of forked lies... Unveiled within the truth of bedded abandon; her heart diminishes within this quiet essence. Bound by the undeniable moments harnessed; released by love’s faded evanescence. Unveiled to the desires of her passions; the forgotten voice of love lingers beneath; A solace gift of forewarned honesty now disinherits honors to love's bequeath... (Written: April 9^th, 2008 8:58 a/m) Copyright © 2008 Vickie L. McColley In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love poétesse d ‘ amour ~ poétesse romantique Embraced ~ Embrassé

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on April 12, 2008

There is novelty of perception here. Well done. Jon Michael Willey

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on April 9, 2008

Your verses very nicely complement the photo (which I really like), Vickie. You express much here. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis xo

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

ahhhh, mmmmmmmmm, ahhhhhhh, mmmmmmmm....

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Hi Vickie, You really have written a piece that we can all identify with. We have all fell vicitms to the "unveiled" truths that haunts us through our lives, even when the "unveiled" seems pleasing.

Unveiled by the darkness of hidden;
I heard the silk voice of love�s cry.
No longer held in deceptions wrath;
spoken by the satin possessions of lies.

How many times has our lover, fianc�, spouse, or just a friend, spoke to us through the "satin possessions of lies."? I would be rich if I could have a dollar for each time I was lied to and betrayed by those I loved and trusted.

You have written another time immemorial piece that deserves to be in a glass case in a library for everyone to read. You give the reader something to think about, as we go through the rest of our lives.

Thank you so much for sharing.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), little sister, Barbie

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Such genuine, raw expressions wrapped in an innocence, just wonderful....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Breathtaking and elegant! So that's how you do it! Beautiful and flowing and ever glowing. Thank you for more than this write. Deborah

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

To the depths of your romantic heart, I commend you on a magnificent poetic genius.
Another beautiful piece.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by E T Waldron

I enjoy your creativity,the way you form your thoughts shows you are a deep thinker who has learned much about love...
ET

Reviewed by Samuel Stone

Excellent write, raw with power and depth... Enjoyed...
Wishing you Well
Sam

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Unveiled is truly unveiled, very beleivable piece

Reviewed by tisha b

I like the intensity of this piece. I feel that there is something to be read inbetween the lines.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Wonderfu thoughts