Photography Artist: http://thierryv.deviantart.com/
(Written: April 24th, 2008 7:04 a/m)
Copyright© 2008 Victoria L. McColley
In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love
poétesse d'amour poétesse romantique
Embraced ~ Embrassé

He said I was Beautiful…
I then told him…
I have beauty;
Oh yes, indeed I think I do…
But it is only seen
on the other side;
for only there is the reflective depths
of my hearts true imbue…
If you look closely
you will see undenied;
I have petals of tenderness
that stem from my strength
to support what I do not hide;
I also have very strong roots
that know the reasons why
true st beauty is often denied…
But you see I have always known…
this part of me is hidden from his eyes...
Through your words, your roots pierce the soils of my heart,
unveiling their elements to my blood and vision to my soul.
The last stanza is intriguing. I shall ponder on that last stanza and get back to you in regards to my thoughts on that.
Thank you, as well, for appreciating the beauty of my poetry and my spirituality. It is very deeply apprecaited. They are both aspects of my life I've worked on very much, and it does a heart good to have it appreciated by someone who is poetic and spiritual as well :)
Robert M
Robby Baby...
you know how it is, me with a million nicknames! PFFT
Masterfully done!
BEauty is in the Eye of the beholder!
and you kept in close! Strong roots are beautiful in itself!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Shexooo
STay Positive!
STay STrong!
this part of me is hidden from his eyes…
Too bad for him, then. A lovely, expressive piece, Vickie. Love and hugs,
Regis xo
hugs
Fee