Abandoned Bounty
In the hopelessly severe
abysmal depths of love’s immeasurable passion,
betrayals heart is claimed by the poverty of absence.
A gallery of memories awaken
into the tormented chambers of divinities soul
releasing emotions of sorrow.
Alone in a tattered life of résistance
so full of integrity’s blindness
feelings perish into the past of another day
unnoticed by existence.
Devalued by circumstance
the truth remains on the ledge of desertion
while silence tears down the walls of destruction
without so much as a word spoken.
The heart echoes volumes of injustice,
yet forgiveness enfolds the strength
of the immeasurable passions
of love’s abandoned bounty.
(Written: May17th, 2008 4:32 p/m)
In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love
Embraced ~ Embrassé
poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique
Copyright© 2008 Vickie L. McColley
This is by far the worst feeling in the world being abandoned, you captured that feeling quite well in this poem. Bravo, well penned.
Nicole
The passion in this prose is unlike any I have ever read - phenomenal!! And your choice of image is exceptional!!
Hugs,
Lance
Regis xo
HOW NICELY PENNED. Acceptance is the the wisdom.
Leaves me flounderin here in mine !
{It's a good thin i can swim lassie!}
while silence tears down the walls of destruction
without so much as a word spoken.
The rest is also AMAZING! Love your heart and this speaks Volumes Vic! I feel torn with your chosen expressive wording!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Shexooo
hugs
Fee
So sad.
Your pen seethes with emotion, Vickie...
Well done!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Georg
Ted
quite a hole, from abysmal depths to the ledge of desertion.
As always, beautifully done. - Gene.
Captured a stunning vividness
I especially love
The heart echoes volumes of injustice,
yet forgiveness enfolds the strength
of the immeasurable passions
of Love's abandoned bounty.
Powerful words of wisdom!!
Beautifully written "Brilliant"
Peace Love and Light..and hugesss too...Morning Star