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Abandoned Bounty
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Wounded hearts are incredibly resilient,
or perhaps love is when all else is an abandon...

 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Abandoned Bounty

 

In the hopelessly severe

abysmal depths of love’s immeasurable passion,

betrayals heart is claimed by the poverty of absence.

A gallery of memories awaken

into the tormented chambers of divinities soul

releasing emotions of sorrow.

Alone in a tattered life of résistance

so full of integrity’s blindness

feelings perish into the past of another day

unnoticed by existence.

Devalued by circumstance

the truth remains on the ledge of desertion

while silence tears down the walls of destruction

without so much as a word spoken.

The heart echoes volumes of injustice,

yet forgiveness enfolds the strength

of the immeasurable passions

of love’s abandoned bounty.

(Written: May17th, 2008 4:32 p/m)

 

In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love

Embraced ~ Embrassé

poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique

Copyright© 2008 Vickie L. McColley

 

 


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 Reviews of "Abandoned Bounty"
Reviewed by Nicole Weaver
Reviewed on June 21, 2010
Vickie,
This is by far the worst feeling in the world being abandoned, you captured that feeling quite well in this poem. Bravo, well penned.
Nicole

Reviewed on December 6, 2008
Hello Vickie,

The passion in this prose is unlike any I have ever read - phenomenal!! And your choice of image is exceptional!!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
I am privileged that I love you, Vickie. Thank you. Love and best wishes always,

Regis xo

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen
Reviewed on June 16, 2008
forgiveness unfolds the strength.......................
HOW NICELY PENNED. Acceptance is the the wisdom.

Reviewed by Warren Miner
Reviewed on May 31, 2008
Yer emmotional ocean {way with words}
Leaves me flounderin here in mine !
{It's a good thin i can swim lassie!}

Reviewed on May 25, 2008
the truth remains on the ledge of desertion
while silence tears down the walls of destruction
without so much as a word spoken.
The rest is also AMAZING! Love your heart and this speaks Volumes Vic! I feel torn with your chosen expressive wording!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Shexooo


Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
My darling, these lines are so darling and true, wounded hearts are still as tender and loving...

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 19, 2008
Ah sweet Vickie, even though I am still on vacation I couldn't resist looking in on a few of my favorite friends here on the den and I am glad I did for this write is indeed a true romance lovers treat. Well done and keep the heart always open to new miracles.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on May 19, 2008
This so touches the devestation a soul feels when their life's bounty has been abandoned. My younger sister faces this trial, recently, and I feel for her and her daughter. One minute her world was all she could ask for, and the next minute, none of it mattered! Twenty years, shattered in a split second!
So sad.
Your pen seethes with emotion, Vickie...
Well done!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on May 19, 2008
Such depth of emotion expressed here, to say the least, it is his loss, and your strength!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
Solitude silences the heart's security. Betrayal's heart walks the promenade of guilt. You are a master of the love poem. Who could compete with such immense talent? May peace be always with you. JMW

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on May 18, 2008
An empty side on our bed is the most vivid picture of a winter's cold.

Georg

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Beautiful poem, Vickie! But the bounty of love can never truly be abandoned - it rings all through your poem.

Ted

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Adding up all those lovely lines, Victoria, you dug yourself
quite a hole, from abysmal depths to the ledge of desertion.
As always, beautifully done. - Gene.

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Wow beautifully expressed feelings words
Captured a stunning vividness

I especially love
The heart echoes volumes of injustice,

yet forgiveness enfolds the strength

of the immeasurable passions

of Love's abandoned bounty.

Powerful words of wisdom!!

Beautifully written "Brilliant"
Peace Love and Light..and hugesss too...Morning Star

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on May 17, 2008
Wow. You said it and said extremely well. Your words set off vivid images of barrenness, aloneness, loveless, entombed in silence the destruction rains down. But just in time forgiveness so growth is possible. Awesome write. My review has not done this poem justice. Liz


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