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Deception's Palace
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This write is a works from a bizzare dream I had about someone I was looking for in a very creepy place, so creepy I woke up :)
Photography Artist: http://autumnsgoddess.deviantart.com/ Deception’s Palace In darkness… destruction composes a veil of consequence to the lusted inquiry of deceptions palace… The secrets will lie behind the walls of torment… Lurking within the shadows of demise, searching endlessly for the crucifixion to destroy lonely hearts with anguish… Fear is the tool to wedge indifference between the illusive realities; deceived by a false frontier. The masked disputant of dishonor serves sustaining selfish pleasures… imprisoned by greed… The phantom of broken dreams lives, to thrive on the chaos of shattered lives within infinite fantasy, resurrecting the murk of ill willed erosive justification. (Written: May 30^th, 2008 10:32 a/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2008 Vickie L. McColley

Reviewed by Katie Gabrielle

Reviewed on June 12, 2008

wow this is really good...I can relate to some of the emotions
evoked in your words here...been there felt that...

katie

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Deception lives in the bowels of deceit and disrespect. Intriguing prospects theorized in your poem. Another masterpiece of poetic endeavor. God bless. JMW

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Very interesting. Jumbled dream made sense and is wise. Excellent wrtie. Liz

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Deep and pensive as if you are pondering aloud the nature of the beast that lives always on the edge of your world.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Once I found my self in one of those palaces, luckily I had that never mind kind of despondence to jump from the top of the tower and escape that palace of deception.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 2, 2008

Deep thoughts that seem to over take your entire being in such a haunting mannor....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

I at times can be very nervous so to me this would be haunting. Thank you for sharing another one of your wonderful writes.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Very haunting