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To Kneel and Amend
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Come To The Lord's Alter

To Kneel and Amend

I was silence
At one time
A whisper in your ear
The thought of an idea
The call of visions unclear

I came to you in the quiet medleys
The gallant might of moon beams shone
Across the empyrical sky through infinity
There the froth of sunrise rose

Beyond the canyons of all desperations
Within the caverns of secret's burrow lain
The mass of shadows fortune arose the thunder
offering me to pour out the sacrisity of rain

A meager self wrought giver
Through the son of a thousand men
Beneath this grave of sorrow's grievance
I call upon your soul to kneel and amend

 


© Poetry by: Victoria L. McColley

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "To Kneel and Amend"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
Sad write that grabs the soul of the reader. Love and hugs to you, Vickie,

Regis

Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2008
outstanding poem..

Reviewed by Debra Baker
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Victoria,
This poem cry out in madden hour heartache. Written with such intense expression. A winner...........

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on July 3, 2008
Exceptionally written! Love Holly

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
Written with such raw emotion, yet very gentle, wonderful piece...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
Strongly felt with the heart Vicky. Your words never disappoint us. thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
Purrrrfect!

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
One of the best I've read of yours. And you have written many excellent poems. May peace be always with you. JMW

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
I love reading your poems and this is one of them.I love how you let your words flow freely and naturally.The picture is amazing.

Edwin

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
Victoria, I love this poem, it is so eloquently written, and the picture simply stunning..Nice job my dear.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
This is one of your best, Victoria, despite the pain, the tears.
I especially love the first three lines. -gene.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 1, 2008
The longing and ache in this one reaches out and squeezes the heart of the reader till we can feel the pain of it all. Very intense Vick and bleeding like an open wound.

hugs
Fee


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