The Needed Door (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

Absolutely beautiful! What wonderful phrasing and rhythm. Such a lyrical sense of sensual harmony. Oh, my!

And my dearest Vickie, your closing is classic poignancy--
"Into the depths of your loving eyes
heartache has finally closed the door..."

Oh, I really love this poem, Vickie. It brings tears to my eyes. Absolutely beautiful!
Richard

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on July 9, 2008

'To hold in honors the torch of fire' echoes of 'Tiger, tiger, burning bright.' How vivid the vision of passion burning like a forest in the night. In reading your work so far I have instinctively detected the prominence - even if suggested - placed on fire or at least the sensation of burning embers waiting to scorch through the restraint and burst into blissful ecstacy. Restraint reigns in this poem as you reveal that passion in its various guises also, and with equal potency, gently whispers the sensual scripts of erotic dreams through each willowy frame of our twilight screens. What a vision.
Into the depths of your loving eyes
heartache has finally closed the door�

Love triumphant.

Regards
David

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on July 5, 2008

You never disappoint with your passionately expressive verses in your unique style; thank you for sharing your gifts, Vickie. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 3, 2008

The divine Miss Victoria. Bravo! A great poem. My wishes for a happy Fourth of July in celebration of our nation's birth. God bless. JMW

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on July 3, 2008

You have such amazing talent.I love your work.Its priceless and precious like you ;-)

Edwin

Reviewed by Random Thought

Reviewed on July 3, 2008

Your passion is matched by very few if by any. Your gift is magnificent. I shall spread the word for the entire world needs to be witness to your gift. "The Whisper" is well crafted. Thank you for allowing me to share a moment of your life. God Bless

Random Thought

Reviewed by Debra Baker

Reviewed on July 3, 2008

Victoria, the passion in your heart reflect the words written by your hand and pen...This poem a devine reflection of "when one door close, another door opens." Lovely it is...

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Reviewed on July 3, 2008

When a love closes the door I have always felt it is because it wasn't meant to be and it has to close to open for true love. Vicky I really enjoy your writes and look forward to them. thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2008

Your writings although very different than John Linko are indeed just as good. Hold them close for they are excellent! Love Holly

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 2, 2008

When heartache closes the door there is then room for new love to enter the frey, beautifully told...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 2, 2008

...the whisper of erotic dreams. Caught on the gentle breeze
that blows our way from beautifully romantic Indiana. -gene.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on July 2, 2008

Wonderfully written Vickie!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on July 2, 2008

Lovely poetry, an exquisite pen.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on July 2, 2008

Oh don't I know of this healing power..I still jump into the fire though, why not, you only live once and you gotta go for it..Beautiful words here, Vickie, thank you for your beautiful soul.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 2, 2008

Love this tale of romance's healing power, when love is lost and hearts are broken it is only love that can mend and repair the damage done. That power is truly magical and should be treasured with all costs when it occurs.

hugs
Fee