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Vesting Within My Heart
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Salvations of Inner Peace
Photography Artist: http://lisajen-stock.deviantart.com/ Vesting Within My Heart… My emplaced mind streams like the flow of rivers; Caressing the many stones of fortitude beneath; I find myself wading within the banks of reflections; Peering into the crystals glimmer of life’s spiring thirst; The sand of sinking sediments feel like burying a memory; Submerging myself deeper into this mental emporium; I impalm the emolument of virtue’s stout resolute; Vesting within my heart surrounding the waters of purity; Impallid wishes bloom within the heart of love’s cadence… (Written: August 10^th, 2008 10:09 a/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2008 Poetess Victoria L. McColley spiring: to shoot or rise into spire like form; rise or extend to a height in the manner of a spire.

Reviewed by Robby Baby Poet of Amour (Reader)

Reviewed on September 1, 2008

Another "flowing" type of poem. Very simple yet profound. There is a unique flow to this one, and it makes one want to read the poem again to absorb it all. One gets a strong feeling that they are submerging into something deeper when they read this poem

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen

Reviewed on August 21, 2008

Impallid wishes bloom within the heart of love�s cadence�

Yes they do. Like a seed in the rhythm of life, it will become a new beginning.

thanks for the words of life and love.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 18, 2008

Love you Vickie girl... Be blessed always.

Regis xo

Reviewed by J AG

Reviewed on August 14, 2008

Your passionate expressions raise us up into the heavens, where your words like angel's wings embrace us with visions of love in its truest forms. We are honored.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 12, 2008

YOur pulse is as strong as you feel it Victoria, with the rushing river flowing through it!
I love this poem, and had to look up a few of these unknown words!
WHERE? do they come from - in your smart mind and deep heart!
I am impressed and the picture I adore, I love the feeling it represents!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Soulful SHEExooo

Stay Positive1

Reviewed by Debra Baker

Reviewed on August 11, 2008

Victoria
You continue to ravish us with the beauty of your poetry. This poem was spectacular...Stunning my friend...If I wore a hat, I would tip it and bow gracefully in your honor.

Reviewed by Jon Willey

-- "peering into the crystals' glimmer of life's spiring thirst" -- the purity of divine love peers back -- I like this poem a great deal -- love is about and dancing for real -- God bless - JMW

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

"...submersing yourself in a mental emporium..." where all is possible, where nothing is impossible, where the image of your face in the water never will become old.

Georg

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Truly beautiful Vickie

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

I feel radiant waves of serene energy within your words, my dear friend, The water flows like your beautiful words.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on August 10, 2008

In this, Victoria, I do sense the beat of...love's cadence. -gene.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Vickie your words read like a beautiful song. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Though the dictionary came in handy again...it did little to take away of the beauty of this write matched to the beauty of the photo. Lovingly created Vick.
hugs
Fee