Calling of Valedictions (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

Calling of Valedictions
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Peace, Love & Poetry...
Calling of Valedictions Standing within the silence of perils doom…I heard someone knocking on the gated chisel of my heart’s door. Like an echo of fear permeating into the distant memories of abandon, I looked outside to peer into the distrusting foyer of stepping stones. Nothing stood in the silent passageway of presence; nothing but emptiness knocking on the perseverance of my heart’s recessing threshold. Like a shadow of wind captured inside the glimpse of tomorrow I needed to answer the calling of valedictions… Within all confusion I became like a beggar of hope, thinking silently into the chambers of my soul, I peered outside… Perhaps the promise of love’s trust has arrived… Peace, Love & Poetry December 1^st, 2008 3:00 p/m Embraced~ Embrassé In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2008 Poetess Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by J AG

Reviewed on December 22, 2008

We are all searching, hoping to find that once we open the door, it will be for that right person. We take chances because we have hope, hope that outweighs the fear, and if we're lucky, what enters our lives is as wonderful as a breath of fresh air ... No matter what may, keeping hope and faith is what makes life worth living. Once that is gone, so is life, and then why live? Reminds me so much of my uncle and the choice he felt he had to make ... to find relief in some way.

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on December 10, 2008

goodbyes are endings in and of themselves. there is always hope in I'll see your later. only that later seems to never come. be blessed and always smile.

randy

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on December 4, 2008

sweet goodbyes are some valedictions -- others, not so -- very beautiful write Vickie -- peace and love to you -- JMW

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on December 2, 2008

Your poetry resonates with my soul. I love that you ended with hopeful thoughts.
Very lovely, surely have missed your beautiful work
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Hello Vickie,

Undeniably perfect . . . superb writing!!

Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

"Perhaps the promise of love�s trust has arrived�" Keep hoping and pressing forward in faith. From what you shared with me on HAWN, I know that you have endured much and have been given much wisdom in return.

Nice imagery in this one Vickie. I like the intermingling of melancholy and hope.

Light and Wisdom ...
richard lloyd cederberg

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Once again, a most compelling offering, Vickie.

I peered outside�
Perhaps the promise of love�s trust has arrived

A spark of hope at the end. Thank you for sharing. Love and hugs and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

"...distrusting foyer of stepping stones..." which one should look at and never fall to the temptation of walking over it...

Georg

Reviewed by Sheila Roy

Reviewed on December 1, 2008

Victoria,
Very nice. This feels like an important moment of inward thought and emotion. From beginning to end, a journey of the spirit. Well done.
Sheila

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Good to see you back and writing such fantastic pieces. Well done my friend.

fee

Reviewed by Linda Law

This one is excellent. lindalaw

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

I love this, Victoria. I think it's one of your best. -gene.