I See You... (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

I See You...
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Within The Very Blessings of a Current Moment...Memories Last Forever
Photography Artist: Avesun http://www.dreamstime.com/Avesun_info I See You… I peered into a rivers stream; Looking upon the ripples edge… I seen a memory of you my love; Walking within avowals pledge… I gazed upon your heart of promises; Lingering within gracility’s heart… Looking upon the eventide of sapphires; I reached for my lost soul to impart… Concealed within the chambers of my spirit, I see you every single day… Embracing the bodice of our deep love; Where promises do not slip away… No other destiny could I ever see; Peering endlessly upon this rivers stream… From deep inside my ripples edge; For you I still continue to dream… (Written: June 14^th, 2009 10:56 a/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on August 4, 2012

excellent

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

THOUGHTS OF A PAST LOVE ARE ARTISTICALLY EXPRESSED IN THIS WELL WRITTEN PIECE. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on June 22, 2009

"Looking upon the eventide of sapphires"
"Embracing the bodice of our deep love"

A nicely penned poem. I really enjoyed those two lines, they are very poetic.

Blue skies and sunshine
Handsum

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on June 21, 2009

Simply lovely at all points..I loved reading this, it flowed just like the river of your dreams.

Beautiful Poetess...
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Alain Gracio

Reviewed on June 19, 2009

I felt a warm embrace as I read this. So much love and tenderness
Cheers
Alain

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

With Out Dreams You Will Have Nothing...

TRASK

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

To dream with you, Victoria, is t o fall in lov e
with your language:

Embracing the bodice of our deep love....

-gene.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

As is expressed in your line .... "Lingering within gracility�s heart�" you also allow the reader a moment of elegance and beauty of movement and expression. Once again poetess, with seemingly effortless panache, you take the reader through delicious and sensual imagery to expound on your souls vision.
Delightfully constructed.
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

...and peering through the key hole of your heart too.

Georg

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2009

truely beautifull words, using the image of the stream as a mirror to your memory, wow,
this one would make a great recite.
thanks bringing the beauty of words into my life.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

The evident emotion of longing comes across as does the love within the heart....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Very beautifully expressed Vick, I can picture you wide eyed and smiling looking into the river of love
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Lovely verses that reach deep into the soul of the reader and echo there, Vickie. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love, hugs, peace, and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

One of my favorites Vicky. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Beautiful Vicky! I love the "...eventide of sapphires" and the visions this all created!
Job well done! :)
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Fantastic write of longing!

Lin

Reviewed by Mary Lacey Desertrat

Victoria,

Such a beautiful poem written so well. But how sad, sitting on a river bank not with your love but merely dreaming. Enjoyed.

Mary