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The Lacustrine Spirit
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This poetic expression is from the conception of those people we meet in our lives whose presence is so utterly beautiful to know & feel & experience…This is for YOU…
The Lacustrine Spirit Effusive are these sodden restraints of cleansing piety; Doused within love’s lenitic presence of sweetness- Where words bind to the nectareous soul these ebullient visions of you… …Awakened by the suffusions of your mollescent voice; Pluvious showers of clarity are caught upon her serums heart- …Unyieldingly desirous yearnings’…she wishes within continuums to bathe in your deluge of emotional presence… Opening altruisms of her undulant needs; She freely pours into the delectations of you… …and in this…there is a rivulet of growing passions- Flowing within freedoms buoyant breadths… Her estuary of ambrosial expressions…wading into you… Surrounding herself into your noble pools exploring new depths within esteemed calm waters …she begins knowing personal insight- …the luxuriant submersions of true percipience; the rare beauty of acumens trust… Purifications of wisdom are now her buoyant rafts; Lathered by virtues worth… The tidal currents unleashing into you…sensual elevations an exploration of your caressing waves- Where aqueous channels of intimate compassion are the shoreline of elysian promise; Propelling decorum’s weightless bounty- You are her serene acceptance of emotional tributaries… Bathing in your evocative words are expressions of integral dignity; Melding upon the immaculacy of your soul into her deep wells entrusting anchorages to you… Through your subriguous words spoken in love caressing the dissonant spaces of her soul…you are to her; the lacustrine spirit of hope… (Written: September 1^st, 2009 6:03 p/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on October 3, 2009

Vickie, there is passion in this tribute to those individuals -- there is great love and understanding for them -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on September 8, 2009

Exceptional image - the purest pearl being offered from the shell. Whomever you are writing this for is blessed indeed. You have fashioned a gorgeous write filled with the honeyed mysteries of sensuous imagery and unique phraseology. A delight to read and interpret.
blessings ...

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on September 4, 2009

Awesome indeed Vick, and I feel you are one of those to me and so glad that you are....
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on September 3, 2009

Vickie,
This is much more than "a rivulet of growing passions"...this is a passionate, raging (in the best sense) torrent.

John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Thank you for sharing this gift dear Vickie. I am glad I have access to a dictionary at my fingertips. (LOL!!!) Love, hugs, and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jms Bell

I AM ALWAYS AWARE OF HOW BEAUTIFUL POETRY CAN GET WHEN I READ YOUR WORK. IT IS DONE SO WELL WITH PHRASES AND IMAGERY THAT TOUCH SO DEEPLY. THANKS AGAIN FOR SHARING 'HIS' GIFT AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Richard Orey

When a hungry need for effusive romanticism sweeps upon me, there is no choice but one: Here at home with my dearest Victoria.

With pictorial image and even before savoring your initial words, my lacustrine spirit felt awash in sweet harmony and I knew peace.

Wow, Little Lady, you know how to kick-start my juices in the most original of ways and always leave me begging for more!

Gentle hugs and tender wishes,
Richard

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Victoria, Never have I met a woman such as you. . . .your words can
can change my day! You are a beautiful woman w/an enticing soul who can see beyond a human's soul. . . .
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

beautifull words from a very beautifull soul expressed as only you can thank you for letting us be a part of your world.
Dave.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Wow, what a journey through beautiful words of romantic love and expressions...I felt as if you were writing about how I feel right now. Interestingly digested by my soul.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Elysian promises coming from a literary Goddess, tasting in every word one more exquisite nectar than the previous one.

Georg