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The Unveiling
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Releasing transient doorways pledged by fate to the worthy vestibules of love’s attenuate embrace; dignity stands before devout honesty like a cosmic storm... ...Those past 4-5 days of the full moon coming to rise was incredible! I hope everyone enjoys the beauties of the moon every single day.... it amazes me the connection poetic expressionist have...the moon, the stars... Inspiration surely embraces us all in many ways... I get so amazed by the wave lengths we share with each other...it is beautiful... (might I add...those positive waves of enlightenments bounty..Godsends...) Peace & Blessings
Photography Artist: Lev Dolgachov http://www.dreamstime.com/Dolgachov_info The Unveiling Elite durations knocked upon majestic thresholds of serene divinity; offering subtle clues within the moon lit universe… Scoping within the vast spheres of an inquisition; thoughts roved under stellated celestial galaxies: Are we just withering stars upon gazing moons? Do heavenly bodies peer into the descrying window panes of seclusions revelation? Or are we walking within the magnanimity of privileged excellence? …Knowing there is loyal sublimity fortressing wisdom’s virtues… An abandon surrenders into the faithful heart like shooting stars…quickening into the stellar presence of the sky… Evoking a calm essence within the soul of love; unyielding echoes dance to lunar songs; like kismets of perfection… Within the devotional oath of honor; Integrity stands with stately pride; Inside this vastly expanding universe as a peerage of solar significance into the veranda of ennoblements… The fealty terrace of hope…like the rising empyrean gifts of divinities opens before the exalting privileges of enlightened deliverance… Releasing transient doorways pledged by fate to the worthy vestibules of love’s attenuate embrace; dignity stands before devout honesty like a cosmic storm… Releasing astral perceptions of existence… Flourishing within the celestial commitments of emotional presence entering into the elevations of allurements…an imperial soul; …awakening rises to the sentience of emotional unisons; offering equanimity’s tranquil bounties ...revealing declarations of eminent trust… Aspiring within the foundational embrace of peace is this quietude of voluminous expression; these silent admissions unveiling the wondrous luminaries of your beautiful heart… (Written: September 3^rd, 2009 6:49 p/m) In Joy, In Peace, In Grace, In Harmony of Love Embraced ~ Embrassé poétesse d'amour ~ poétesse romantique Copyright© 2009 Poetess Victoria L. McColley *http://stores.lulu.com/poetessvictoriamccolley*

Reviewed by Debra Baker

Reviewed on September 7, 2009

Vicky
I am again clinging to the verbal galaxy of your beautiful poetry... You are a gift which keeps on delivering the bountys of love unto each of us your readers. Simply Lovely...As the Bell herself which writes such beautiful poetry...

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Once again, Victoria, I am swept up in your ever-expanding vocabulary which opens my mind (and heart) to "kismets of perfection…" -gene.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on September 6, 2009

Vickie,
I have the feeling we're, "walking within the magnanimity of privileged excellence"...and are not fully aware of it, yet, not in this human form and condition. I love what you explore here and where you take me once again.

John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Heart captivating and soul bending as love, passion and romance come together to offer us the very best in love's own sweet offering.

hugs
fee

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen

Releasing transient doorways pledged by fate

to the worthy vestibules of love’s attenuate embrace;

dignity stands before devout honesty like a cosmic storm…

Releasing astral perceptions of existence…

Flourishing within the celestial commitments

The telling that you do in this beautiful piece not only reveals the passion of love, but the purest of celestral forces that move the universe around the center of life itself. The forces that are the essence of our souls and in their moton we are moved, and in their beauty we are beautiful. Then so is one who is you, the poet that you are.

Reviewed by Richard Orey

OMG, if my lover whispered to me such sweet adorations, I'd wash her feet with kisses. It wouldn't bother me in the least that I wouldn't be quite sure of what she was saying. Surely, her rhythmic vocalizations would overwhelm my senses and carry me to "enlightened deliverance."

My Beautiful Heart, it's only 9:00 a.m. here on the West Coast and with your poetic offering I already have reached the apex of my day somewhat akin to viewing a majestic strip tease of words.

Unique and wondrous!

Richard

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

The words of the poem evoke gossamer veils, twirling Salomé, languorous Sherezade...and like mist on mornings it evaporates so to reach the astral state where heavenly bodies meet.

Georg