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Finally...
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~Dark Poetry October~ Oh the sweet deliverance of enlightenments Severed by emotionality of truths To mount a trophy of deception’s cursed Upon the mantel wall…. These Bondage of Empowerments Oh…they really do feel very good…. Psst…..this slain wild boar-hog photo is from my favorite Authentic German Beer Steub :) Historic ambiance & also the Swedish Snitzel tastes great too!! Pass a stein of brew please…
Finally… Your memory stroked my thoughts today, as I looked upon my mantel trophies… Seeing you there in all the memories; I embrace this moment; Like the downy feathers of passion’s fulfillments; I feel this wondrous profusion… I rest my desires to know with clarity; The truth of you; To remember your tender touch of thorny lies…. I feel empowered today; This feels good; Finally I am set free… Caressing my softness of thoughts, I recalled intimately detailed, your growing excitements of falsity; …Those exposal’s of spilled deceptions in your moment of awkward urgency… Denying me the truth… …you are so afraid of honesty. Touching my heart with your deceitful voice; I swear I can feel you here with me now… But I look upon my mantel of trophies, and seeing you there, in all those painful memories, I am pleased to know you cannot hurt me, ever again… You’re there… mounted…imprisoned where you belong; On my mantel of truth…a trophy… A medal of honor for myself… My valued prize, for loving the deceptions of you… I feel so good inside, knowing I am empowered today; Thanking Love I can finally see; Remembering …the destructive taste of your desires for me; Finally I am set free… (Written: October 15^th, 2009 7:34 p/m) Dark Poetry October 2009 In Anguish, In Vengeance, In Menace, In Discordance of Lust… Copyright© 2009 Dark Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley http://stores.lulu.com/poetessvictoriamccolley P.S. any similarities of resemblence to the photo & expression are strickly coincidence... :)

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on November 11, 2009

THERE IS A SWEET ESSENCE OF 'VICTORY' THAT PERVADES OUR VERY SOULS WHEN, AT LAST, THE 'CHAIN' BREAKS! GREAT WRITE...SO INSPIRING! THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

Reviewed on November 2, 2009

wow that sounds like it comes straight from the heart, bad memories one place for them into the garbage,
loved the poem but where did you get that photo it's awesome.
stay happy.
Dave.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on October 30, 2009

And then...the lover will come and the flames of his heart will make your naked skin to blister where each kiss fall, blisters of love, like trophies that one can't treasure but taste each flying moment.
Finally...hot ashes do remember the fire!

Georg

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on October 29, 2009

..when one is afraid of honesty it sure puts a damper on things,,,this is powerful,,like the photo (stuff it!) great write Vikie!
Love and Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Vickie,
Such a fine song of liberation, an anthem and mantra.

John

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Vickie, this write moves freely and philosophically upon this reader. It's a somber enlightening freeing juxtapose of the power of seeing into the complexities of being and realizing that often what we envision is not what really exists. Certainly being hurt sucks, but often we are confused by what is intentional and what is unintentional, and oftentimes we get hurt if we don't get what we want. There is a message in this under the surface that is clearer than the gist. One of your best!
Light and Wisdom ...
r

Reviewed by Felix Perry

This to me is one of your ultimate bests Vick, I love the simple way it is written with such clarity but also with so much to be thought of in between lines. You weave metaphors cleverly disguised in thie write so perfectly...well done.
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

I also have one of these trophies,, thank goodness I released all the negativity of that entity! He broke my heart but gave me my freedom, so now I live in the moment and embrace all my positivity!!!

Great poem!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

There is a lot of hurt within your words Vickir, another wonderful write you share.

Newfie Hugs, Rose