Love’s Devote Passion

Through softness you whisper
within poetic words
(tenderness)
as your soul quietly speaks
looming over promises
vowing your heart’s essence
full with emotional meaning
these omniscient depths
sharing in love’s devote passion
your innermost soul…

© Poetess Victoria L. McColley 2011

(translation using SDL Free Translation.com)

La Passion consacrant de l'amour

Par la douceur que vous chuchotez dans la sensibilité de mots poétique comme votre âme parle menacer
silencieusement sur les promesses qui jurent l'essence de votre coeur pleine avec le sens d'émotif ces
profondeurs omniscientes qui prenant part à la passion de l'amour consacrant votre âme intérieure…

© La Poétesse Victoria L. McColley 2011

(then again translated using SDL Free Translation.com)

and when I translate their french version to english it reads like this:

The consecrating Passion of Love

By the softness that you whisper in the sensitiveness of poetic words as your soul speaks to threaten silently on the promises that swear the full
gasoline of your heart with the omniscient direction of emotional these depths that taking part in the passion of the love consecrating your internal
soul...

where I then rewrite their Free French Translation to this:

The Consecrating Passion of Love

By the softness that you whisper
in the sensitiveness of your poetic words
as your avowing soul speaks silently
devote to these promises
swearing under the heavens
commitments of your heart open
within the omniscient eyes of love
offering direction into the future
binding these emotional depths
taking part in the passion of the love
consecrating your internal soul...

© Poetess Victoria L. McColley 2011

and then the Free French Translates this verse to this....