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POETICA: Subtle Morsel
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the reality of truth's existence...
Poetic Recitation: Across The Efflorescent Skyway I joined you across the efflorescent skyway The empyrean ideals of thoughts and The majesty of the moment Or was it the priceless offering I seen This emotional debt of gratitude That wavered about the silvery elms with intangibility As I held tightly to the sacred messengers Those soft words spoken Deep inside the emotional quake Were only quietude consumes meaning And the truth of tenderness that lives forevermore Awakens As a subtle morsel of rekindled wanting Knowing their own reflections are truthful And the grievous lost souls are outstretching from their sorrows Buried by their needs to believe in true love where the unification of their twin soul dies Consumed by the reality of truth’s existence… © Poetry by: Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on June 15, 2012

Vickie, as usual I enjoy your recitations - and this "Subtle Morsel" is no exception - "this emotional debt of gratitude that wavered about the silvery elms with intangibility as I held tightly to the sacred messengers" is a marvelous poem within a poem - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael

Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen

Reviewed on June 11, 2012

I love the mixture of sensuality blending with realistic events of sorrow and even the notions of the loss of hope, where I one can lose themselves in their own sorrow.
Great write Vickie

peace and love forever
dan

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on June 7, 2012

Victoria, If it was a perfect world we would not be in the predicament that we are in...I think we all find our own truths eventually...sometimes they are very hard to swallow---truthfulness!

Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by David cox (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2012

love it, it's beeen a long time since you have done a recitation, i could listen to your voice for hours, more please.

Reviewed by John Flanagan

unfortunately, Vickie, can't access this one

john

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 5, 2012

My plugged ears prevented me from hearing the gist of your poem. It be nice if you could post the words as well.

Ron

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

and forever more a soul melding into a cosmic twinship. what is the shape of truth? a sphere? truth coagulates and sets us free tangibly recognizable in circular vibes emitted by the messengers...a rite of passage held sacred and scrutinized by none if...if it was a perfect world with no jealousies and pain...deliverance justifies existence for those souls like us who are a cut above the mold and christ-like in power...

yours adoringly,
Sage