His Heart's Vacancy (poem) by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse on AuthorsDen

His Heart's Vacancy
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when the lonesome whistle blows for you my friend...
His Heart's Vacancy your song came to me vacant and unyielding as the stilling of time whispered into my soul I seen the bounty of your emotions furrowed gullied by the broken well of forsaken dreams "He is an arc of the wind." my muses cry eclipsing his moonlight upon lovers dreams releasing sensorial scriptures from his thoughts (echoing through the vaulted railway chambers) he dances with beautiful psalms and hymns singing with the wintry dusk of snowy owls my heart warmed by his blissful sonnets spilling within the sonata of his metaphors I drifted upon the chilling breeze once more abandoning choirs of muse to free themselves from the conformity of another's haunting prison those to blind to see his majestic beatific garden ...as i watched him pluck rosemary, sage and meadow rue I felt like a minstrel of allegory untamed and infused floating near the wreath of his heart's vacancy as an icy kiss warming upon the wishes of his soul... Poetry by: Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on February 7, 2013

A writing well done indeed, Vickie...........GOD BLESS YOU.

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on February 2, 2013

A very Sincere poem written so Heartfelt as always Amazing poetry Laura

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on February 1, 2013

Quite compelling and wonderful!
Peace love and light
Amber

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on January 31, 2013

TRANSCENDING THE LIMITS OF OUR HUMANESS...TAKING FLIGHT AND BECOMING ONE WITH NATURE...FEELING HIS LONELINESS, HIS WANTS...HIS NEEDS...RELATING TO AND SPEAKING OF HIS HEART. WELL DONE, VICTORIA...A REMARKABLE WORK, ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by John Domino

Hey Vicky,

Bravo!
Another winner!
This line captured me:
"an icy kiss warming upon the wishes of his soul..."
This must feel like a sweet and sour dressing that was just warmed up.
Well almost...

Abundant blessings and heartfelt love of delicate tasteful poetic music from above,

Giovanni

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

So full and fresh! One word rolls off the other in this. Cool write indeed.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

I applaud you my dear, your mastery of the English language is something to behold. I bet you sleep words, eat words, dream words etc :-)This is exquisite!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Your gift of words shines in this elegant piece of poetry.

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Love it, Victoria! Simply beaytiful.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Okay. You've outdone yourself, Victoria. This is about a poetic as it is possible to write. There are s-o-o-o many lines that reach out and caress me, even the "emotions furrowed / gullied by the broken well / of forsaken dreams" give me optimism that the broken heart will surely mend. I rest my case.