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A Dying Orchid
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I Love You Forever & Always
(cross my fingers heart taps...)


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A Dying Orchid
 
the wind blew gently upon my heart's vault
like a rapture pushing against my front door
it battered as an echo knocking against time
opening the recognization of its intrusive presence
my eyes searched for deeper spiritualistic meanings
as emptiness came inside like lost tumble weeds
pricking against my patience like a fortress of briar thorns
reminding me that tears are the nightmare of reality's kisses
strolling along the wake of my living memories
whispering a silent mystery to my tattered soul
as the icy snow begins to fall like soft fresh cotton
floating as tender gestures among my silent thoughts
where my minds eyes are trapped by another's violence
hearing death knells and the horrid screams of murder
I wither like a dying orchid searching for fragrant sunshine
parched by a thirsting need to embrace you forever and always
as the sleet arrives to knock harder on the thresholds of my front door
I opened it with hopeful intentions to see if you were there
and all I could see is the reflective nothingness of today's taunting pain
as you tell me not to cry for you...
 

Poetry by: Victoria L. McColley 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "A Dying Orchid"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on March 9, 2013
Vickie, this poem is written with every one of loves emotions you have sensed. A wonderful work, so seamlessly smooth in your grand style. I wish you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on February 28, 2013
Poetess keep sailing your verse upon reflections inside who you are, a talented poet.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on February 27, 2013
Great writing, Victoria.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2013
Victoria, This was written from all your senses and I am sorry for your loss.

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 27, 2013
Poignant.

Ron

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 26, 2013
Vickie
this is a beautifully written poem;
you are in full flow here and you shine
kudos!

john

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 26, 2013
Almost every line is a poem in itself. Magnificent work.

George

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on February 26, 2013
Dear Victoria,

This is so deep. I pray it's not you that is wounded. Please read my latest prayer poem "Broken and Wounded" and in the meantime I will put you on my prayer list just in case.

May peace be with you, love pour into your heart and blessings flow over you from the Lords' bounty.

John Michael

Reviewed by Laura Fall
Reviewed on February 26, 2013
So touching and beautifully wrote Laura

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on February 26, 2013
This beautifully written piece was so sad, yet so very lovely.......GOD BLESS YOU and YOURS ALWAYS.

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on February 26, 2013
Such a sad story...but one that is told extremely well. Love it.
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on February 26, 2013
Deeply penetrating into the soul of the reader (me), as the lines of this beauty of a poem took me on a winsome, but fear-based ride. Still the hope was there throughout until the very last dying, but not forgotten voice. Tremendous poetry.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on February 26, 2013
Touched the core of me; every line, every thought, you took me there with you...I am the other orchid leaning towards the sunlight...you can lean on me.

***Brilliant and profound write my darling****


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