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Hawks and Haunted Magpie Crows
by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse → (All Poetry by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse)
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I been thinking about those long thoughts between the visionary shadows of the owl & the songful light of the morning dove…
Hawks and Haunted Magpie Crows Did I fall from the sacred valley Into where the poison oak grows Over the mooring meadow buried twice whence the sanguine moon finally rose Come save me my darling nightfall over the sorrows pouring down below Where I made our silent hung wishes and the rainbows seek the snow The ice storm is chilling upon my heart whispering death knells deeper into my soul as a lost grave from the trenches of a life your presence freed from this gnomonic knoll busy yourself now with the velvety fated shadows dancing with the hawks and haunted magpie crows marked by the sparse diamonds of our eternity I love you forever and always I hope you know… Metaphorical Memoirs by: Victoria L. McColley

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on March 29, 2013

Vickie, this poem now sits at the top of the list of your very best poems. Sensitive, poignant and filled with promise and love. I wish you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael Happy Easter

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on March 27, 2013

HERE'S A POET WHO KNOWS THAT THE BEAUTIFUL LIGHT FROM ABOVE SHINES EVER SO MUCH BRIGHTER AFTER WE'VE BEEN THROUGH...THE HAWKS AND HAUNTED MAGPIE CROWS. LOVED IT! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 25, 2013

a profoundly beautiful write
enjoyed reading
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Teresa Walker

Reviewed on March 22, 2013

Pulled and tugged at my heart...my being felt the loss of a love I wrote poetry about. I knew this love and loss...a rainbow of love in the beginning, the cold of snow in the end...

Teresa

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on March 19, 2013

H a u n t i n g.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen

Reviewed on March 18, 2013

Lovely sonic elements and visuals!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 15, 2013

Has the feel of deep dark secrets buried in a distant past of which only the birds know.

Ron

Reviewed by TONY NERONE

Reviewed on March 14, 2013

A vision of beauty. Gorgeous writing, Vickie........GOD BLESS YOU>