Simply passionately erotic.

Ron

A beautiful painting in vision and style.
Cheers,
Dan

Metaphors abound in this grand piece of poetry.


G

Excellent write, Victoria.

Really, it's perfection defining internal unity and physicality with emphasis on the insatiable state of affairs. Might we call upon factual circumstances, is it that we arrive at poetry of this caliber when metaphor defines those beings that reside within us. Our mutual understanding of an all-nighter coats your finger where you were in to the third knuckle charging my system, the metaphor unwashed. More to come, love conquers all and scripture denotes you're a randy beast to the olfactory, Vickie, Poetess and sensual artist. Your muse suits you well. It suits me that you indulged. Your panties watered the flowers this morning...

Yours xoxo

Superb poetry, Victoria! My favorite line is, "A platform to dive into emeralds." And the falling jewels were fed mightily by the naiads for sure. I loved the fantasy and dreamlike scenes within the lines.