Watching
with crystal vision
illuminated
by the darkness
Our glistering yolks
are uniting the bond
Reaching
a new height of awareness
as the natural scent
levitates us
the emblematic quilting
of our secret lair is bed
Anointing
our inticately knit fibers
with desire
as the flesh of our flesh
unfolds kindled fires
gazing intensely
upon our hand dipped taper
the cotton wick
is ignited at both ends…
Metaphorical Visionary Poetry: Victoria L. McColley
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Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on June 26, 2013
You " wick ed woman, thoroughly enjoyed, Victoria.
Coated with the others gives it its potency we burn as one. Sound is not muted nor its affiliate sense, taste...12 inches of metaphor halved. Thank you for sharing...
You are sending vivid signals when you write about, “dipping the wick,” and “burning the candles on both ends.”
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Always,
Deborah
but Loved your intimate poetry!!
Lady Vivian
Yours xoxo
I see no allure at all in tasting cold steel while kissing the lips of a luscious woman. What kind of person requires metal in their mouth to feel alive while kissing? Not I.
Ron
Love & Peace be with you
William