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River Jewels
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River Jewels

I waved farewell my Love
To the drowning river jewels
Watching you sink sink sink
I stood with my hopes and dreams
Opening my heart even wider
To reveal with you my soul of souls

It was in you I sheltered the visions
These fertile seeds we have sown
Uniting us on the shape shifting clouds
Where I erased your pain and sorrows
Giving your heart new life in love

I wanted to shower you with sunshine
To spin you around the tree tops
With empirical promises coming true
Bathing you inside the passions of tomorrow
The here…the now…the today…

But I was not given the secret garden
The dreams of my wildest dreams
So I wave farewell to you my Love
Watching you sink sink sink
My sweetest river jewel
Drowning in your own desires…

Farewell Love Poems: Victoria L. McColley

 

 


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Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on July 9, 2013
A farewell with conviction
worthy for moving on..

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 9, 2013
I haven't been following your love life through your poetry, but the last line suggests that the object of your love brought about his own fate of his desires. As a man, I can identify with that. Our desires tend to bring us down, in spite of the best intentions.

Ron

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on July 9, 2013
Victoria...such a beautiful poem, yet the words are so sad ... I love that line, " Bathing you inside the passions of tomorrow " nicely done.
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Linda Hill
Reviewed on July 9, 2013
Victoria,

When one door closes..another opens. Enjoyed your poem!

Many blessings,
Linda+

Reviewed by Andy Turner
Reviewed on July 8, 2013
Said with depth of love.
I hope this is just poetry.

However, sometimes nothing is left.
No blocks can rebuild.

Though dry leaves can become moist once more.

And eyes of wonder
and divine beauty
will light the way
for sunshine
to follow and
new trees, secret
breeze, beautiful
eyes to for him
to remain at her sides.

xx


Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 8, 2013
Quite the farewell, Victoria. Time to move on.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on July 8, 2013
A very fitting poetic send-off. Now travel down the right river and enjoy life! You deserve so much more.

Peace, love and blessings,

John Michael Domino

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 8, 2013
I was someone's crush at one time...turquoise is a sinker...truth hurts for a little while but a lie hurts forever unless you tie it to a jewel and sink it...what was I thinking? I have a whole store with precious jewels now...and the rainbow trout are biting! Tonguing a garlic marshmallow into two channels side by side releases an awful lot of stuff that isn't forest friendly...good bye in Cherokee...do na da go hv i (pronounced doe-nah-dah-go-huh-ee)

Yours
xoxo

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 8, 2013
Ah, such passion, but passion spurned. I relate, Vickie, I rode through life at a fast gallop and did not heed, nor even understand fully the jewels I encountered and left to search for more and more jewels. We shoulder heavy burdens when our past catches up with us.


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