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Smoke Rings Hue
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Connective Awareness: every element is a part of the whole


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Smoke Rings Hue

In the sand hill cranes
My old timer sees
Backgammon penitentiary
Sloping sky and breeze

Canyon run facility
The outback closes saloon
Aces and traces are significant
Sagebrush owns the moon

Walk with me on a meadow
Then lay down with this guise
All that is forsaken moon dust
Will never again be denied

It is among the lost hedge groove
Where the Lepidoptera do reveal
Naked in the sacred orchard
All have tried to justly conceal

Open now to the wayward bison
This sky-filled dream coming true
Among the dancing shifting visions
I foresee within the smoke rings hue


Metaphorical Poetry: Victoria L. McColley
 

 


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 Reviews of "Smoke Rings Hue"
Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on July 30, 2013
Very different poetry for u Victoria...I like very much.

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on July 29, 2013
Burning sage so cleansing,
Vickie, your poem
bringing sugarplum visions
forming rings of many hues

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on July 25, 2013
Very crafty...the first two versus I had to scroll up to keep checking who the author was as it was so much in line with what our Sage Sweetwater writes and then the last verses summed it all up as you. Fantastic work.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 25, 2013
Incarcerated motley crew every bane is a part of the whole I saw the shutdown but my saloon is still pouring! Red eye sees a vision smoke signals in Doc Holliday's territory I'm your huckleberry who shot the sheriff! The fuse on the dynamite is shorter than the cons think!

Yours xoxo

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 25, 2013
Your trip to the West seems to be inspired more by mushrooms than the other stuff.

Ron

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 25, 2013
Great poetry!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on July 25, 2013
Taking a trip with the smoke rings.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 25, 2013
Wonderful imagery that paints a picture on my mind. That's poetry!

George


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