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Rock in a Stream
by Dawn Anderson → (All Poetry by Dawn Anderson)
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Not autobiographical

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Wordless hostility,

Waves of disappointment,

Tears that sting the corners of eyes.

 

Criticizing glances,

Icy cold silences,

Orchestrated dances of avoidance.

 

Lies,

Grief,

Disillusionment –

Dreams that have often been mocked.

 

Yet

Like a rock in a stream,

She continues to endure,

Shaped by the turbulence

That flows over her.

 

With the passage of time,

She has mastered each lesson –

Her eyes revealing the intensity of her soul.

 

As she sets out in search of her destiny,

She rests assured –

Knowing she is not alone.

 
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 Reviews of "Rock in a Stream"
Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on May 5, 2008
Beautiful, Dawn... I love the analogy you have drawn here. There is great truth in what you write.
Cryssa
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Your words flow with emotions,, this is excellent Dawn,, you are a gifted writer.
:)Christine
Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
...words like wind...give movement to the waters of time...and the beauty of its travel...become your words of change...well written and new found.
beautiful Dawn...
John
Reviewed by Carin Spirit
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
This is awesome. Thank you for writing. Warmth, Carin'
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Superb portrait of an image powerfully painted with words!

ET
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
This is beautiful and tha analogy of a rock in a stream always slowly eroding to a smooth shiny surface...that is special but strong to think on.

hugs
Fee
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Excellent write, Dawn; very well written! Love the pic!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Yes, Dawn, I like your style. Did I say that before? Gene.
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Wow Dawn!!! This is a timeless gem, these are wise words taht every human can relate to. Thank you for sharing...
Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Dawn,

Love the metaphorical comparison between the rock and woman. As the water shapes and molds the rock so does life shape and mold the woman. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Maybe not autobiographical, but it certainly describes me during my marriage! Well done, Dawn.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
It seems you have found your literary calling, Dawn . . . You have mastered the short verse as you have proven herein, and now you put them together to make for a longer version . . . It works! . . . Your insight is good . . . Your moralistic fiber is pushing against the doors of apathy when it comes to affairs of the heart and dangerous traits in human beings . . . Well done!!!
Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Yipes! Three more lessons, and you will have earned your degree in psychology! Your imagination is on 'High" with this one, and it is deeper than comfort. A very compelling write, and one amazingly first person. - Bill
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
I love your poetic style, Dawn. You describe the mood until it grows into a vicaious experience for the reader. Excellent write.
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
Quite a powerful piece, Dawn.
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
POWERFULLY penned - and oh, so true - well done, Dawn!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on May 4, 2008
this is a truly beautiful and wise write--i love it and know that we truly are shaped by the things we go through in life
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