These words seem familiar... Is it just my imagination or is this a poem that you have rewritten as an acrostics?
Maybe it is just that the last line is haunting... bringing back memories to me of things that were better left unsaid...
I guess we could all apply a bit of damage control when it comes to the mouth. When you stop and think about it, the mouth is the storehouse and output of personality. It is also the tumultuous reliever of emotion--and that's where the danger lies. (You always write poems that are really thought provoking.)
Hello Dawn, I read your poem,"The Gift of Reason" Yes, some people have secrets, some reveal them eventually, some do not. Life is somewhat a mystery. Nice poem. Makes one think. Keep up the good work. Please feel free to visit my site here in the "Den".
I'm reminded of that old cliche of opening one's mouth only to find a foot has been inserted but sometimes we never know until we ask. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
ah, reason and wisdom, if only we each used these gifts to their
fullest...
another wonderful write, dawn. many congrats on your book!
how do you like teaching english in milan?
be well, poetess,
carolyn
Dawn, I love this acrostic poem...I just read your bio, I cannot believe you live in Italy, and you were from Connecticut..I live in Connecticut.. kindred souls I am feeling..
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Very well done indeed,I have missed you..thank you so very much for caring about me..you truly are very sweet..have a wonderful and safe night OK...Hugsss
Sometimes its better not to know the truth , or sometimes it can open many doors. A thinking poem.....M
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
What we're willing to accept as "truth" is often not the truth at all - you've skillfully painted another portrait of a moment in one's life. This is your gift - to present your readers with poignant snapshots into the psyche/heart of one...
Reminds me that where I am moving to a sr low income apt they like to gossip a lot, so to not let any thing confidential come out of my mouth. I'll be better off keeping certain things to myself from now on.
Gift of Reason, Dawn, is a Gift of Writing. Good to see
that you're as good as ever. The Mediterranean obviously
agreed with you; it wouldn't dare do otherwise. -gene.
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Maybe it is just that the last line is haunting... bringing back memories to me of things that were better left unsaid...
Cryssa
Love & peace
William
Ed
I'm reminded of that old cliche of opening one's mouth only to find a foot has been inserted but sometimes we never know until we ask. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
fullest...
another wonderful write, dawn. many congrats on your book!
how do you like teaching english in milan?
be well, poetess,
carolyn
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
John
Be always safe,
Karen
hugs
Fee
the acronym " secrets. " Very clever !!
Harold M. Nash
Love Tinka
Edwin
Christine
Larry
Newfie Hugs, Rose
that you're as good as ever. The Mediterranean obviously
agreed with you; it wouldn't dare do otherwise. -gene.