I loved the growth in this poem from the opening thoughts clean andsoft to final beauty of life's contradictions. You painted an interesting progression in thought and awareness beginning with the great opening stanza.............Jerry
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
That opening stanza is pure and wonderful! The entire piece is calming and "open" and oh-so-relatable.
SO TRUE...UPS - DOWNS, RIGHT - WRONG, STOP - GO....STILL PRESSING ON...PROGRESSING. YOUR INSIGHT AND REVELATIONS PERTAINNG TO HUMAN NATURE IS MARVELOUS AND ALWAYS...DONE WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSING. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Oh Sweetness in your words, yes a wise person learns from their past indiscretions!!! Never harbor guilt or remorse, for we are what we were and what we will be! Nicely written my dear friend.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Dawn, there's a lovely universality about the way you think and write. I suppose we all are victims or benefactors of life's contradictions. Excellent. -gene.
Reviewed by Jerry Diamond (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2009
We sure are all on a steep learning curve in life Dawn
Hang tough !
Lovely and clear, with an image that speaks to the senses in the very first stanza.
Axilea
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2009
THIS is one of your absolute best, Dawn.
"gentle whispers of days to unfold." says so very much / The rest of the poem sorta revolves around this line in my opinion / I reread it and am amazed at the subtle suggestions, the out-and-out reality of words and lines which underline deep thought . . .
'... my cotton lined dreams, gentle whispers of days to unfold'....'each a personal page from a book whose ending has yet to be written'--------- I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
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Sheila
Stay well and keep writing
Ed
still, I grow as I learn from
mistakes past and present, smiling
at the beauty of life’s contradictions.
- David
A true philosopher speaks in this, eternal and timeless, and with a deep and forgiving understanding of human frailty.
John
hugs
fee
Love it!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Hang tough !
Jerry
Axilea
"gentle whispers of days to unfold." says so very much / The rest of the poem sorta revolves around this line in my opinion / I reread it and am amazed at the subtle suggestions, the out-and-out reality of words and lines which underline deep thought . . .
:)
John
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
Georg
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.