What a vivid description of the state of soul, Dawn. Very profound in its waiting for fulfillment. That last last stanza is a quote that ought to go on every 2010 calendar..........Jerry
Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2009
You've been busy while I've been "away"! This is perhaps one of your all-time best in every sense. Indeed, I will be adding this to my library. The writing, style, message are absolutely wonderful. The last stanza, in particular, is brilliant.
The second stanza adds the conflict in this poem... showing the warring of the mind. I have to disagree with the line that says the powers that be aren't listening though... I believe they always listen, just that sometimes they laugh at our opinions of what we think ought to be... :~)
Cryssa
Interesting. Reminded me of the film, What Dreams Are Made Of, or something like that, with Robin Williams. A bit spooky. I like this poem and where it ends up. Hugs, J'nia
Nice work Dawn...it is patience of dreams that create our most cherished accomplishments, one must truly have belief embedded within to have and become those dreams...
Wow- loved this.
This is pure inspiration on so many levels.
Take a bow, tip your hat- whatever your pleasure.
John
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
Deep thoughts arranged this fine effort, Dawn / Patience / Something I have not had much luck with / I find as I grow older year by year I gain a bit more of it though . . .
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to ease the those pains
Love & peace
William
Great to be here to read your wonderful words once again
Almost forgot what great poetry was all about
Thank You Dawn
Cryssa
Yet, wait…be still...
there is no sense
bargaining with the Powers
that Be…luckily, they aren’t
listening.
- David
nice...
Art Sun...
Sheila
Nicely done!
Georg
Christine
hugs
fee
Stay well and keep writing
Ed
Happiness sometimes comes at a dear price. Our past mistakes serve as the teacher. Peace, Ble3ssings & Friendship Always, Paul.
This is pure inspiration on so many levels.
Take a bow, tip your hat- whatever your pleasure.
John