DOT COM (poem) by Edwin Hurdle on AuthorsDen

DOT COM
by Edwin Hurdle → (All Poetry by Edwin Hurdle)
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"DOT COM" I don't have to type on a keyboard The website of my life works very well. It operates properly with you being a part of it. The page runs with 100% completion. Without you,it can't function right Dot com,you've never been in front of me Dot com,you've never been in back of me Dot com,you've never been above me Dot com,you've always been next to me I don't call technical support for assistance Your love is all the support I need 24/7 Always on my side like Nationwide Insurance. Hand in Hand,Shoulder by Shoulder You're the greatest sidekick of them all. Dot com,you've never been in front of me Dot com,you've never been in back of me Dot com,you've never been above me Dot com,you've always been next to me. I'm bless that you're a part of my existence A connection that keeps going strong. Grateful to know that you're always there. I can count on you cause you're simply #1 Dot com,you've never been in front of me Dot com,you've never been in back of me Dot com,you've never been above me Dot com,you've always been next to me Copyright(c) 2009 by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed by Leanna McNabb (Reader)

Reviewed on April 2, 2010

Very creatively interesting!

Reviewed by Ahmad Saqer

Reviewed on August 16, 2009

nice poem Edwin

thnx for sharing

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on July 9, 2009

Very good - enjoyed
Doug

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings

Edwin I find " DOT COM " Very interesting, and
encouraging! An excellent read Edwin, may the Lord
always bless you in all that you put your hands to
do.

P.S. Sorry for taking so long to visit you
Edwin, I will be back real soon!

Love And Prayers
Always!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

I like this Edwin, fine piece and concept.

Reviewed by Jms Bell

UNIQUE LOVE CONCEPT WITH A REPETITIVE THEME THAT HOLDS YOUR PHRASES AND IMAGERY TOGETHER NICELY. ENJOYED. BLESSING AND THANKS FOR SHARING. JOYCE, HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by M Flack

God, online 24/7 through the mystery of the Holy Spirit Broadband :o)
Great poem. Thanks for sharing...

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2009

Excellent, and very clever I might add!Holly

Reviewed by Ruhi Sonal

Reviewed on July 6, 2009

brilliant poem... really enjoyed it.

Reviewed by DELETE ACCOUNT (Reader)

excelent

Reviewed by Nicole Weaver

Reviewed on July 5, 2009

Edwin,
Very clever indeed! You certainly have a way with words.
Nicole

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on July 1, 2009

How clever and romantic!! B r a v o, Edwin Hurdle, B R A V O !!

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on June 30, 2009

I can hear the music, Edward! Wonderful rhythm, analogy and sentiment. "Never...in front...in back of...above me." The only way to be...

Lin

Reviewed by Lew Duffey

Reviewed on June 28, 2009

I enjoyed this but I replaced Dot com with J C... Jesus Christ and through him, GOD!
Great write, indeed.
God bless,
Lew

Reviewed by lili dauphin

Reviewed on June 9, 2009

Very interesting. Like it.

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 7, 2009

An excellent write Edwin
Very creative and enjoyable reading
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Goddess Love (Reader)

Reviewed on June 6, 2009

Enjoyed reading your poem and thank you Edwin for the warm welcome to AD. Legacy

Reviewed by Brandi Wroblewski

Thanks for commenting on my poem :)

I like this, it's a style I don't use
but I deffinitely should give it a try
so you've inspired, impressed, and taught me
thanks!

Reviewed by Carol Grace

What a great idea for a poem. I really like the second line. Look forward to reading more.

Reviewed by Natasha Head (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2009

I am hoping you have a tune set to this one! Definately catchy. I enjoy how you take what we work with everyday and turn it into poetry. Anyone seeking inspiration can find it easily in a piece such as this.