Clothes Hanger (poem) by Edwin Hurdle on AuthorsDen

Clothes Hanger
by Edwin Hurdle → (All Poetry by Edwin Hurdle)
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Do you ever feel like people would forget all about you as if you never existed or feel as if you've been treated badly.I think you will understand the message in this song
"Clothes Hanger" You don't wear my support. You don't wear my respect.. You don't wear my kindness. You don't wear my friendship on your sleeve. and inside of your heart Worthless in your world, I don't mean anything to you. My love is not good enough for you to put on. You put me on a clothes hanger a clothes hanger a clothes hanger You put me on a clothes hanger,I'm lost in the closet of your life You've forget all about me Everything that I've mean to you. Everything that I've done for you. Why do you treat me like this? It hurts so bad,so bad that I can't take it anymore You put me on a clothes hanger a clothes hanger a clothes hanger You put me on a clothes hanger,I'm lost in the closet of your life If you don't need me. If you don't want me. If you don't adore me. The best thing for you to do is let me go Set me free from your selfishness I'm better off without you I'm not on a clothes hanger a clothes hanger a clothes hanger I'm not on a clothes hanger,anymore Copyright(c) 2009 Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed by Sheila Parrish-Spence (Reader)

Reviewed on August 31, 2009

Wow, this is really moving. I really like the repeated phrases. Each stanza leads to the next progressive thought. Well done.

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings

Reviewed on August 3, 2009

What an analogy Edwin so profound yet so true!! and Edwin it reads like a song that will minister to many souls!! Thank for sharing.

Blessings!!

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on July 27, 2009

"Set me free from your selfishness, I'm better off without you" -- that is the crux of the matter Edwin -- you have expressed that very creatively in your poem (song) -- this is a keeper -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Janice Beaty Hamilton

Reviewed on July 24, 2009

I love the rhythm, the analogy... great! Blessings, Janice

Reviewed by Mary Patterson

Reviewed on July 23, 2009

Great poem song. I think many of us could get the HANG of this cute tune!...M

Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo

It is terrible to feel forgotten, to be hung on a hanger and stored away with no further thought. So very sad, so emotive! ~Elizabeth

Reviewed by Joan Huffman

Reviewed on July 22, 2009

Nice analogy!

Reviewed by Brenda Dobson

Well said, Edwin. Very cleansing, the emotions, the need for newness shows through. Thanks, Brynn :)

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

It have the cadence of a Bob Marley's tune, the philosophy of a stoned Bob Dylan and the wise afterthoughts of Bob Geldof.
Yes, it is a lot of Bobs but you will get the hang of it!
Nice son, put some music to it!

Georg