A Naga Uta* about 'colors' - explanation of form included.
I shall not feel blue, nor will the green of envy set in this fleshed soul. Let the orange of the sun color my long days with its bright yellow sunbeams. Let my days fill with hibiscus so red and full, aglow in the sun; and small dahlias so purple. Spring forth pink tulips, each tipped with dainty white lace. My days shall then bloom with colors of the rainbow, and welcome the black of night.
*The Naga Uta (a Japanese form of poetry) is written with as many lines as you choose. It is a syllabic poem; a variation of five and seven syllables per line. The lines vary in this order...5/7/5/7/5/7 etc., then always ending with...5/7/7; there is no rhyme required in the Naga Uta.
Dear Jackie, thank you very much for your kind and silent visit to my Den.
I wandered thru your Den, and I allowed myself to read "A Colorful Day" as flowers and birds are my daily friends. I love their beauty and innocence. I don't care how you call it "The Naga Uta" or a single iota, what you expressed is more important. Love Emile
Beautiful write...makes me feel warm all over, and anxiuos for spring...alas...autumn has just begun...but that's okay I love all the seasons...your writing is great, I'll be back to visit again..
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
ahhh...this is a delight, full of color and fragrance. Splendid work, Jackie...and thanks for the info on the form...I do believe I will work with that for a bit.
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
I wandered thru your Den, and I allowed myself to read "A Colorful Day" as flowers and birds are my daily friends. I love their beauty and innocence. I don't care how you call it "The Naga Uta" or a single iota, what you expressed is more important. Love Emile
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Beautiful Jackie!
God bless,
Sandie.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
I like these! Had one up recently.
Love
Alrisha