Jánakú* - For Me, For You
Do
you see
the sky blue
with
clouds white
like cotton balls
such
peaceful day
one can enjoy
warm
south winds
become almost hot
as
the day
lingers thru dusk
all
changes quickly
when sun sets
stars
are many
sparks like diamonds
I
prefer sitting
outdoors at night
a
cool breeze
replaces the heat
a
calmness replaces
our everyday strifes
it's
Mid Spring
Life has renewed
© Jackie (Micke) Jinks, May 2008
*Jánakú
hay-NA- ku
The form was created by Eileen Tabios. It is simple: A tercet comprised of one-, two- and three-word lines; no set length. Variations can be created from the basic form.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
a beautiful pagoda. Lovely work Micke!
Love,
ET
Newfie hugs, Rose
great work Jackie...
John
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D