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Gold Rush
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Will they go ‘round in circles?
Can they make me fly high like a bird up in the sky?



Shiny and gold
Inside the fold
Sliding so easy
For thrills I was told.

Travel in pairs
To an unknown lair
Told they would wiggle
When they got there.

Did they lose their way?
They don’t want to stay
This was a free trip
No money to pay.

I’m left distraught
This is not what I thought
Perhaps I should practice
Next time I’ll be taut.


© All rights reserved MS 2002


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 Reviews of "Gold Rush"
Reviewed by Romantic Scorpio (Reader)
Reviewed on June 29, 2002
The title in every stanza. Excellent!!

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
Reviewed on May 20, 2002
OK, I admit, I'm thinking naughty (nice) hee hee. Did I totally miss it?

Love, Janet xoxoxo

Reviewed on May 20, 2002
I agree with the rest here. This is a thought-provoking piece.

Hhhhhmmmmm......Are these what I think it is? Oh, I've only heard about this lately.

Interesting write!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed on May 20, 2002
Nice pic and interesting write. Very good.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
Reminds me of gold finger for some reason. Fine write!

Reviewed by J John (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
Very much enjoyed ... j

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
Caught my attention! Good write...

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
interesting thoughts.

Reviewed on May 19, 2002
Very interesting indeed!!!!! The secret of the Orient!!!!!

May Lu $*_*$

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
Very nice Marilyn,, enjoyed this piece and the picture. floria

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
nicely written...

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 19, 2002
Clever use of rhyme. Enjoyed it. ~E

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 18, 2002
Several things come to mind in this enigma from naughty to nice...;-)...my my Marilyn...fess-up...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on May 18, 2002
This is a very interesting write and I liked the picture.

Reviewed on May 18, 2002
Good stuff, thought provoking. Thanks.


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