Stars on Earth (poem) by Marilyn Seray on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Victoria Walters (Reader)

Reviewed on August 13, 2002

A perfect picture to go with a lovely poem. You capture the childhood joys of summer perfectly.

Reviewed by Dan Zuewski (Reader)

Reviewed on July 10, 2002

Beautiful poem AND picture :) I love fireflies too... wrote a bunch of nice poems about them.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 2, 2002

enjoyed the poem..... our pasture has fireflies at nite now.... looking for the faeries!........ ;0)m

Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Ohhh...I just love the pic!!! And the poem is just great!! It's so great to be back after what seems to be a lifetime.
Tiana passed on your mesage yesterday and I was so thrilled!! Thank you so much, I hope to catch up on all your poems that I missed soon. It sure feels good to know I was missed.
Hugs,
Jenni

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2002

Even tho its small it picturises toooo much ... great Marilyn gr8

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 20, 2002

Beautiful poem and so perfect for such twinkling delights. I love watching the fireflies at night.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 20, 2002

Enchanting and beautifully written. Great!

Reviewed by William DeVault

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

So charming and enchanting!

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

Used to love chasing those fireflies--and we
called them lightning bugs, too. Such
magical lights! And what a lovely, magical write!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

The stars that light the sky
are starlight in your eyes,
You radiate the brilliant
glow of love. Must be
ordained for Marilyn
"Goddess of the Sea"

Reviewed by Bryt Eyz (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

Fireflie's Elegy:

I often feel a firefly
Held captive by the night sky.
Thru little holes of punctured light,
They watch our captivating plight.

They're falsely feigning freedom,
They captured first the man of Edam.
He's illuminating starkness
While in this shroud of darkness.

Lightning bugs, we fill the land;
Glowing brightly while we can.
The jars of life ignore our plea,
Truth be told, we're never free!
------

I love those things!

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

this is so wonderful...I love the image to go with it, outstanding!!! Glad to be back!

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

Just wonderful and the pic is a perfect match.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

scenes at night are always lovely.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

This is sooo dreamy and wonderful. Like on a fairyland.

Thank you for a wonderful poem, Marilyn!

Sandie Angel :o)