My insides are raging
I want to scream bloody
Murder over your bloody
Body. Yes, I did it, and I
Don’t give a shit who knows
It’s nothing compared
To the many times my heart
And soul was subjected to
Your jackhammer torture.
All the cheating and lying
From your fraudulent
Mouth. You are Satan’s
Pitchfork; burning and
Stabbing at me, scarring me.
Flaunting your seedy-ass
Women in front of me. No,
No decency from you –
Not an ounce; no remorse,
No respect do I get. Well,
No more, you have stabbed
And burned me one time
Too many. So forget your
Insincere apologies. Get up
Off you knees, and stop
Begging like the dog you
Are. Stab your own self
And when you withdraw, the
Pitchfork you will NOT find
blood - you’ll find the tines gone.
(C) MS 2002
NOTE: Purely fiction. I just thought I'd try something a little different
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Marilyn,
Very powerful write. This is definately different for you, but it is great.
The Voice
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
WoW! This is different for you
Powerful work in this one...
Hope they all read the (purely fiction part)
Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)
Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Pheww!!! glad i read the note at the bottom
I was ready to start running LOL
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Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Great write and very different. Good job Mele.
Love and Aloha, Mundo
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Reviewed on December 4, 2002
Whoa sweets! I've been trying to comment for the longest time and it finally let me! What a strong write! Love your expanding creativity here! Glad it's all fiction... Talk to you later.... hugs
rant on, baby gurl! whoa, i hope i NEVER get on YOUR bad side!! good ranting here, marilyn! thanks for sharing! love, your friend, karen lynn. (((HUGS))) :)
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