As I take a very slow stroll on a beautiful sunny day,
I feel as if someone is following me.
I pick up my pace and begin to run.
The sun is bearing down on me.
I am so hot and sweaty.
There’s a fork in the road with a fence in the middle.
I am so tired.
I want to rest but I need to continue.
Turning around, I see your shadow and smile.
There’s no better way to go but high up and over
I like the way you showed the obstacle and then how you got past it. Good write.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2003
Marily I like how your mind works. This is lovely. floria
Reviewed by Angela Velez (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2003
this was great! how many would of thought to do the same? i'll never forget this one
i'm going to have to tell my girls and see which way they would go i'll bet you they'd keep on running!!!!! great job.
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i'm going to have to tell my girls and see which way they would go i'll bet you they'd keep on running!!!!! great job.
nicely done
Sandie and Buddy
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Thank you and a wonderful New Years . Thank you for all the support of Peggy and mines Duets....
LMM
I had to laugh at your comment in Peg's review, haha, still smiling 'bout it!
Erin
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after all? Enjoyed...
Have a prosperous New Year!
This one makes you think, and how is that there are always fences, when at first there were none?
Very thought provoking piece!
Hugs,
Maria
Beautiful as always..
I enjoyed this...
Happy New Year...
Trixie
Nothing like plain English guidance in a choice--great snapshot. Vicky
fences have a purpose this is so very excellent.
Peg