what would be my reply
When anyone ask me,
whom do you like
next to parents and friends?
rooms which are denied fresh air
and sunlight
the sound pollution from television
every night
the difficulties of life in
each and every plight
makes me feel fright
the vexed heart gets comfort
in her soothing company
the turmoil in the mind disappears
while the tranquil feel remove the fears
she gives me sound sleep
with a leap into her lap
which air coolers and foam beds deny
except for occasional naps
cool breezes from trees lull me
birds returning to their homes sing for me
the beautiful sky with moon and stars
narrate me the stories from past
she lets me dream,explores my emotions
lets me listen the nature's music
introduce me to the paintings by god
gives a different angle to my inner eye
carries a message to the world with clouds
envision me with the concept of one world
can anyone trace?
It is my terrace, which I always embrace.
This is a translation from my telugu poem,"maa Daabaa" which means "Upstairs".
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Reviews of "My Reply"
Reviewed by Aravind Daruvuri (Reader)
Reviewed on May 16, 2002
The underlined meaning of the poem is fine but the arrangement of words and the rhetoric should be improved. Keep it up
Reviewed by satish gummadai
Reviewed on May 11, 2002
Hi
This one is very good.May be because I also enjoyed alot sitting on daaba.
Ron Coyote, Man of La Mangia is adult literature featuring adult humor and content. The work is a satire/parody on Miguel Cervantes' Don Quixote, published in 1605. Under its humorous surface, the novel is a funny but important analysis of the declin
This one is very good.May be because I also enjoyed alot sitting on daaba.
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This is a beautiful write. You're doing much better indeed! It was an unexpected ending, hehe.. :) Take care and keep writing!
Tiana
anta effecitve gaa ledu translate chesesariki....
satish...