AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Neenah Davis-Wilson, i RickthePoetWarrior, iLloydene Hill, iDean Cambourakis, iJoy Pedersen, iJ. Allen Wilson, iLaura Cavanaugh, iPatricia Sims, iCharlene Proctor, iFERIAL Haque, i

  Home > Psychology > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Scott Allan Tacke

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Books
· Poetry
· Blog
· 43 Titles
· 210 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Nov, 2007

Scott Allan Tacke, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



Distorted Vision - Part One - Myopia
by Scott Allan Tacke → (All Poetry by Scott Allan Tacke)
   Rated "G" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

A Poem In Three Prescriptions


Myopia





A fly was in my oatmeal and I begged my mom, “Come see!”
She looked and laughed, “That’s nothing but a raisin there you see.”

“How sure are you?” I asked my mom. “I thought I saw it jump
From that small piece of cinnamon, to that big oatmeal lump!”

“It did not,” she exclaimed. “You just refuse to see I’m right.
“Now, take that raisin in your spoon and swallow every bite!” 


“Look there! It moved again, and it’s a fat horse-fly!” I whined.
"A raisin,” she rebuked me. “You have merely closed your mind.”

Just then the fly leapt from my bowl and buzzed around in flight.
“Aha!” I yelled, “Whose mind is closed? You’re wrong and I am right!”

She spoke not, but then washed my bowl out in the kitchen basin,
And shook her head in awe, “My word! A real-life flying raisin!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
 
 


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "Distorted Vision - Part One - Myopia"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on January 11, 2008
Scott,

Very original in content, and I was smiling by the end. Had to laugh about the raisin/fly imagery. A pleasure to read~
Sheila

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on January 11, 2008
hahaha What a great write! How often people become so fixed in their own views. A wonderful way to illustrate this using humour. Well done!
Chanti

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on January 10, 2008
Cute and very imaginative...

Be safe,
Karen


New Poetry by Scott Allan Tacke
Popular Poetry (Psychology)
  1.  blink'd
  2.  With the Secret of It
  3.  Happiness Lost
  4.  Basking in its Own Light...
  5.  Pondering...stuff
  6.  Empathy
  7.  Troubles
  8.  Hope
  9.  The Shadow Voices Lied...
  10.  Something New
  11.  2012
  12.  Winds of Change
  13.  Chaos
  14.  Cracks
  15.  Ocean of Emotion
  16.  Loss
  17.  Darkness Has a Face
  18.  Stop Asking
  19.  The Homeless
  20.  Cold Wind
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

FREE DOWNLOAD Malignant Self Love - Narcissism Revisited EXCERPTS by Sam Vaknin

The Free Preview includes excerpts only. The full print edition is available from Barnes and Noble. Both the print and electronic editions are available from the publisher's Web site ("Malignant Self Love - Narcissism Revisited"). The Narcis  
Member BookAds

P Point Management by William Cottringer

This book helps managers focus on doing the little things that get the biggest results with the least side effects.  
Member BookAds

Diary of a Narcissist by Sam Vaknin

The anatomy of a mental illness - its origins, its unfolding, its outcomes.  
Member BookAds