You don’t bring flowers to a hockey game; You don’t meet the fullback with kiss and embrace When boxers get decked, who cries, “It’s a shame!" Who didn’t expect they’d get punched in the face?
Things aren’t made right with a pacifist’s song. Take heed and take notice for all that it’s worth. Let John Lennon know that the Beatles were wrong; That violence and war is the way of the earth.
Goodness and love’s not our natural state, Anyone living can make this admission. As creatures, we’re more prone to evil and hate; Suff’ring and pain is the human condition.
It starts at the moment sperm meets the egg, The coin toss; the face-off; the twelve-round campaign. Life shows no mercy, however you beg; Our efforts for succor are all made in vain.
No time to mourn when you’re hooked or you’re held. So, don’t act surprised when you’re slashed or get clipped. Play through the pain, punching back when compelled; Not one single round in the match can be skipped.
So, don’t bring flowers to the hockey game; Those who reason with fighters just look like fools. Life is a sport and to win is the aim; It's kickoff, and time now to play by the rules.
There is alot of truth in this. I think alot of these types of observations come from daily living. The opening lines on this are great, the images in their opposition play off each other to make their meaning even stronger-it reminds me of my friend who went to see Gladiator and said she couldn't believe all the violence in it and I wanted to remind her the title wasn't Bambi, lol. And as far as pacifism goes, it doesn't work because it is unrealistic when absolute power corrupts absolutely and eventually, someone's ego will demand that absolute power, whether we like it or not. The "Imagine" idea of things is a nice fantasy, but one needs only read a millenium history to find out how that has worked so far, times have pretty much stayed the same. OK, better stop there, I could go into lots of great discussion about this poem because it is excellent and thought-provoking.
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 5, 2008
Enjoyed very much sweet man,stay safe and well OK..Hugsssss
Things to do need to change Scott!
Great heartfelt write that shines!
The next Generation, we must be thinking!
Write On! Much inspired you! I can tell with your expressions!
Warmest Blessings, LIGHT, LOVE and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheoxoo
Explains the realizations that have given the author the views of living life fully. The life each person dreams about.
You must take a look at yourself before dreams can be reached.
Deciding what is the core of belief.
Explains the realizations that have given the author the views of living life fully. The life each person dreams about.
You must take a look at yourself before dreams can be reached.
Deciding what is the core of belief.
Great heartfelt write that shines!
The next Generation, we must be thinking!
Write On! Much inspired you! I can tell with your expressions!
Warmest Blessings, LIGHT, LOVE and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Lady Sheoxoo
STay Positive!
well penned Scott...
John