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THEIR ALL HEADING HOME NOW
by Stephen W. Pollard → (All Poetry by Stephen W. Pollard)
Friday, December 13, 2019    Rated "G" by the Author.
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My poem 'Their All Heading Home Now" is a different version from the one that I added to my blog, because AuthorsDen's computer software kept rejecting it.

 'THEIR ALL HEADING HOMW NOW'

 

The Thanksgiving dinner

And the football game 

Are done and over

The guest's said goodbye

They are in their car's

Heading on the way home

But highways are backed up

Because traffic is not moving

Christmas will be here soon


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 15, 2019
Thank you for sharing this seasonal write, Stephen. Love, peace, and blessings,

Regis.

Reviewed by Stephen Pollard
Reviewed on December 14, 2019
Ronald Hull....The original version that I posted on my blog....I tried several times to post it on my poetry page, only to have it rejected each time, so I opted to post a generic version of the poem, which I feel is too watered down for my liking....

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 14, 2019
A very straightforward truth accented by two of my worst nightmares these days when I read what people write and post here. I'm not thinking I you, personally but want others who see my comment to realize that their spellcheckers are allowing this kind of mistake to be published for a very long time on the Internet.

Car's is possessive. You were writing about cars.

Their all heading home is a possessive pronoun. They don't own "all." You are writing, "They are all are going home now." Or, the contraction… They're.

Ron


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