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HE LOST HIS FOCUS
by Stephen W. Pollard → (All Poetry by Stephen W. Pollard)
Tuesday, May 12, 2020    Rated "G" by the Author.
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My poem "He Lost His Focus" is about someone who was an annoyance who totally lost his focus.

 "HE LOST HIS FOCUS"

 

A self centered annoyance

Got his head in a whirl

When an acquaintance 

Was dating a nice girl

He could not get focused

Creating problems for everyone

And he raised a ruckus

He didn't care about anyone


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 13, 2020
Earlier, at a another poem, "Chatterbox," I wrote about a guy probably got on drugs, and as a result became quite paranoid and very annoying to those who had to deal with them on a daily basis. Eventually he was fired for his annoying behavior and escorted off campus by police. I saw him much later and found him to be jovial and relaxed, even though his father had died, a man of great politeness, knowledge and skill, perhaps the source of his inferiority complex.

Ron

Reviewed on May 12, 2020
A slice of the reality of life for some people at one point in time or another. Jealousy can be very destructive. I hope this acquaintance will clear up his act soon and be more focused.

I used to work in a department where two women were fighting each other daily. Sadly, my line of work had to be involved with them both. If I went out to lunch with one and not with the other, the other one would question me what had we been talking about during lunch. Luckily, I knew well enough to leave out the conversation that was relating to either of them.

Let this be a warning: if you ever talked bad about either one to the other, chances are when they become friends once again, they would hold that against you personally. So don't ever go there. :) Just do your own work and you'll be fine.

Sandie


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