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Crows of the Lower Order
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"Just for a year," he said when he moved his mother in.


Crows of the Lower Order


Eight crows perch subserviently

Eyes petulant, waiting

Delegated to the lower rungs of the electric tower.

A hawk above them preens in his perch.

Today’s catch, squirrel or rat,

His beak poised, a chisel ready.

Impatient, two crows hop upward.

The hawk flaunts his wingspan; they retreat.

Twin jet trails split the cyan sky, cars roar in the distance.

I move on, alone with my dogs,

My heart a scavenged tendon,

My home, no longer my own.


Copyright 2007, Eileen Clemens Granfors
    

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 Reviews of "Crows of the Lower Order"
Reviewed on March 13, 2008

"Crows of the Lower Order" has an esoteric-exoteric symbolism. Everything is there, then all disappears. It is a profound composition.

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on December 16, 2007
At times we share much more than would be to our liking, interesting thoughts......

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
Intereseting perspective, perhaps we all need to clear out a few crows from our tree of life.

Reviewed by R Beeman
Reviewed on December 15, 2007
there is a real beauty to this write. laws imposed by nature are respected within the realm, however ours are not. we suffer intruders into our lives for what sake and who's. thanks for sharing your thoughts.

always.
randy


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