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Wildebeest of Words
by Eileen Clemens Granfors → (All Poetry by Eileen Clemens Granfors)
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I've been away awhile, working with BUSINESS issues. I would much rather be writing.

Picture from National Geographic web site.


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The wildebeest of words is restless,

Seasons are changing, and the time has come to move on.

She sniffs the air of home, unique, nostalgic, warm, safe,

As safe as any part of any world can be.

 

There’s the waller where she and her young

Spend hours in the ooze, the slick mud a comfort

From the stinging flies, the aching heat, the interminable itching

Of her pelt, the tangles of her tail, where others watch.

 

The journey begins, one word piles upon another, as

The wildebeest leads in a direction she knows, has always known,

But does not know at this time and place in the same way,

For things change so, even words.

 

Words become sentences, twisted, difficult to push through,

The story weaves itself, always noisiest at night, as

Herds of words won’t stop.  They hesitate, meditate, ponder, and push,

Until one makes the leap into the river.

 

Fat crocodiles, the carnivores, await the leaders, the chance takers,

Teeth gleam and slash, blood flows. Most of the herd survives,

Moving upward from the river bank to the next plain,

The next paragraph, the next story to a new home until

The restless season demands her return journey.

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Wildebeest of Words"
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on November 6, 2010
Your creativity shines in this poem. I like the imagery of the brave leaping forth. There, you've captured the courage needed to share a poem or story once it's written. Excellent writing.
Sheila

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on November 5, 2010
I love how you layered this write, starting with 'words' and building from there. I also loved the reference to mama Wildebeest...yes, keep writing.

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on November 5, 2010
A most interesting piece, Eileen. Write On.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
How I wish the words would come like a thundering herd and make a splash on my blank paper. You take me on a journey that I have seen many times in stories about Africa. Like the contrast.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
New subject matter does offer challenges of direction and temperament but I've never known you to cut and run. Paragraphs can be edited or discarded entirely and when enough have been written and refined the crocodiles will be stuffed with 20 pound white bond paperwads. P

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
Have we all not spent time in that waller? Made the leap into that river of words? Would we all not be blessed if we could so splendidly capture those words? Your corral must be bulging at the railings. Nicely done Eilene. Thanks Dick

Reviewed on November 4, 2010
you describe Africa's beautiful antelope wonderfully Eileen
through the hunted visuals of the untamed as too
the prowess of hungry words never to be tamed

Blessings
Vickie


Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
No holding you back
Telling how exactly it is
No sugar coating
Just the plain hard truth.
Beastly metaphor
Worded superbly.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
Interesting journey, now go kick Patricks butt to get on that "honey-do" list...e

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on November 4, 2010
Remarkable journey and fresh perspective!
You lead us in to an unexpected and profound place here.
Best Wishes,
Christine

Reviewed on November 4, 2010
Awesome write, Eileen; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D

Got the book yesterday; reading it now! Thank you so much! :D


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