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Punished
by Eileen Clemens Granfors → (All Poetry by Eileen Clemens Granfors)
Sunday, December 31, 2017    Rated "G" by the Author.
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Inspired by the accompanying art work TBU--to be uploaded), as part of the Interpretations program at Columbia (Missouri) Art League. The submission had to be 100 words or fewer!


Poem Artwork

Punishéd

Was it the fresh-faced acolyte preening into baptismal water

Ignoring candle wick?

An envious sunbeam spearing through chipped glass?

A single ember swept from altar fire bellowed into fullness,

Destruction by heretic wind?

 

We search for answers in the scarred ruins,

Turn imploring faces from one to another,

All equally as empty as ourselves.

We beg the passive smoky sky

 To send affirmation that godhead still stands.

 Words cannot measure our desolation.

Can’t this enough be enough now?

 

The mountain of clouds rumbles. Like pewter crashing,

Three norns spew white gasps of ash.

 Jacob’s Ladder quivers, falters,

And falls.

 

99 words

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Punished"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 1, 2018
You wrote that you would be back. And you have come back with a vengeance about our behavior. Well done!

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on January 1, 2018
Much to think about in this write.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 31, 2017
Most thought-provoking, Eileen. Somehow, I feel like what you have expressed through your verses here. Happy New Year! Love and best wishes,

Regis


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