this is excellent. the fourth verse might read more smoothly with one more word added to the last line ie 'that chokes and silences all her screams'. but what do i know, just a thought.
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
Micke Jinks
Reindeer
Extremely well written!
Well Penned
William ......Peace
Love Tinka
Jennifer
(((HUGS))) to you and the kiddos~ love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
You keep it all in perfect rhythm and rhyme
which is always an extra bonus for the reader!
Splendid poetry!
etw