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Shards of my love are littered around me I try to clean them up and put them back in order My trust is over by the door-broken into small pieces My desire has been stomped on by a passerby My beauty has been distorted and it is almost unrecognizable I am tempted to get a garbage can and just dump the whole mess into it without a second thought... Then the prospect of what almost was evolves into what could be and I reconsider my decision Maybe someone will be patient enough to help me piece together the mess that you have just created. Just maybe it can be pieced together and treated gently, lovingly and with care Maybe....

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Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on August 12, 2005

Ah, I like this write, Jam! It speaks of rebuilding from ruin! Good job!

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on August 9, 2005

Through love and commitment, even the most shattered of lives can be pieced back together.
well written emotional piece.

Allen

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on August 9, 2005

A charming piece, Blackberry! One feels the deep pain and hope.
Well done

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

Lovely write, Blackberry! Full hope.

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

excellent...nicely done!

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

Hope shines eternal in love and romance and we can never give up on our hearts.

Felix

Reviewed by June Thompson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

this is a great write
I love how in the end your beauty and hope shown through
well done

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