I Love how you point out that we need to ask for help, and I love the description of the Lord supporting us, and angels comforting us, not just directing from the sidelines. They are there beside us truly willing us to make it, even carrying us when we're too weak to go on ourselves.

Luv,

Ahna

Truly beautiful inspiration. Faith is the key!

This is a personal testament of your faith and trust in Him. I feel the same way. His loving arms always give me comfort. A perfect poem for this Lenten season.

God bless you. Kathy

This is so beautiful. Really enjoyed the read.

I agree. This is beautiful - there is a wonder filled ring of truth about your words.

...beautiful awakening...angels arms...and steps of faith...wrapped in the Lord's care.
this is wonderfully inspired work Cryssa...
John

Simply as good as it gets _ this path(when we walk)eromevol _ Ted

Georg makes a fine point. I do take acception with one line. "if we say our prayers"... I just think that means something different than "if we pray"... know what I mean? But you're right. And the shape of your poem is both a great candlestick, and a nice pedistal--both pretty good analogies for prayer... a place to put light... a place to lift us higher... and I like that we still walk. He just lightens the load-- helps us. Good poem, Cryssa. And since I'm sure you could pick out at least one spelling error in this review, I won't tell you that you left out an apostrophe... me, chuckling...

So, that's what those white pigeons say to each other...I knew that they werent talking only about telling us about peace, but about flying ever higher with a prayer.
Because he made us all pigeons, although some want to be just vultures.

Georg

AMEN!

A warm and loving portrayal of how Creator treats us when we are
wise enough to believe,and trust in Him!Beautiful work Cryssa!

With faith and love we can move mountains - to conjoin your poem to George's thoughts.

Very good meter with this writ - much enjoyed.

~D.

All we need is a strong faith.