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Half my Life
by Cryssa C → (All Poetry by Cryssa C)
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A somewhat comical Nonet poem...

Half my life I’ve spent  with you, my dear,
and half my heart I gave to you
(I couldn’t give you both halves
because then I would die),
but you gave me half
of your heart, and
together
we are
one

 


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 Reviews of "Half my Life"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Hobbs (Reader)
Reviewed on January 21, 2009
Hi Cryssa
What beautiful words. Thanks, Liz

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on March 26, 2008
Now, that was too cute! So sweet and beautiful.

Reviewed by tisha b
Reviewed on March 23, 2008
SWEET AND TO THE POINT

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on March 21, 2008
Together we are 'one.' A beautiful sentiment and testament to the love you share with your husband. This poem lifts my heart!

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by l West (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Ok Cryssa, This is an absolute favorite. I have often wondered how I could possibly love my man with all my heart and yet still live. This shows my how and why I still have a whole heart and he is part of it. I love this, makes me smile and puts together the puzzle in my head.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Awwww, this is so very lovingly tender....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Very clever and lovely poem with a sweet touch of humor!

Wishing you and yours a Blessed and Happy Easter, Cryssa!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Beautiful, Cryssa! BRAVA!

Happy Easter to you and your beautiful family!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Sara Coslett
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Beautiful poem. Sounds like you've found the right piece of the puzzle to fit into love's jagged life. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Lovely offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Say, Sue P has a great idea. I do like this half-hearted shape, though. Cute, cute, cute.

Nonet poem-- never tried one. For those who want to try it,
form: Nine lines.
The first: Nine syllables long
Each succeeding line has one less syllable. (9,8,7,6...)
Thus the last line: One syllable long.

I'd say you did a super job. A+ --Charlie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Wait a moment! your two halves and his alf...uh?
Cute.

Georg

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Beautifully written, J'adore

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Very nice!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Susan Phillips
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
How good would this look as the feminine half of a yin yang symbol! Lovely peom Cryssa.
Sue

Reviewed by c lea harris
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
when you find the right person, life can be more easily conquered of it's trials and someone to share the good times, and accompolishments, for someone is there for you, to cheer you on, and you them, sometimes it's take a while to find that special one

Reviewed by Diana Wiles
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
That is just so beautiful..Love the (almost) heart shape of the lines too! True, true, Love...

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
...half hearted write...becomes whole.
wonderful pen of togetherness Cryssa...
John

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
The two half's make one whole.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on March 19, 2008
You put a smile on my face this morning Cryssa. Sweet, comical, and romantic!


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