Half my life I’ve spentwith you, my dear,
and half my heart I gave to you
(I couldn’t give you both halves
because then I would die),
but you gave me half
of your heart, and
together
we are
one
Together we are 'one.' A beautiful sentiment and testament to the love you share with your husband. This poem lifts my heart!
God bless you. Kathy
Reviewed by l West (Reader)
Reviewed on March 20, 2008
Ok Cryssa, This is an absolute favorite. I have often wondered how I could possibly love my man with all my heart and yet still live. This shows my how and why I still have a whole heart and he is part of it. I love this, makes me smile and puts together the puzzle in my head.
Say, Sue P has a great idea. I do like this half-hearted shape, though. Cute, cute, cute.
Nonet poem-- never tried one. For those who want to try it,
form: Nine lines.
The first: Nine syllables long
Each succeeding line has one less syllable. (9,8,7,6...)
Thus the last line: One syllable long.
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What beautiful words. Thanks, Liz
God bless you. Kathy
Be always safe,
Karen
Wishing you and yours a Blessed and Happy Easter, Cryssa!
Love,
Eileen
Happy Easter to you and your beautiful family!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Love Tinka
Nonet poem-- never tried one. For those who want to try it,
form: Nine lines.
The first: Nine syllables long
Each succeeding line has one less syllable. (9,8,7,6...)
Thus the last line: One syllable long.
I'd say you did a super job. A+ --Charlie
Cute.
Georg
Sue
wonderful pen of togetherness Cryssa...
John